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Hip Hop

Posted: Mon Dec 29, 2008 8:15 pm
by - Mutual -
well this is my first written track

no hook cus i cant get the knack of em but i'm workin on a track so i'll jus leave u with this

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feed will be returned

ohh yeah lyrics:

i live in spite-of-master-hatin maf***as that strike-disasters-waitin
who might-here-after-flakin cant handle this sight-of-faster-satans
in-god-for-saken-lands a plot-be-creatin-plans too hot-for-satans-hands
am i makin sense a shot-for-makin-fans stopped like a clot-of-desercratin-sands
this is whoi am this is who i be so i'm keep this between jus u an me
i started-with-writtens elevated then i departed-to-spittin lyrically-gifted
some say myshit too cute like i jus farted-on-kittens spiritually-shifted
aggravated-with-lines hadda get this-stated-in-rhymes how long i been waitin-this-time
i'm gone be makin-this-shrine to f***as who step up but be fakin-their-spine
spineless like snakes-in-the-prime some people like snails but say they
hatin-the-slime the beef the breakin-of-teeth the rapin-of-beats
nikkas say they rappin uh uh they all demonstraightin-the-heat
they not bringin so they jus be statin-their-beef straightin-the-streets
settin-bad-examples they major bettin-clad-of-samples sun gettin-mad-end-shambles
so sh*** spit to see the fun not wield a gun on my hip-is-a-belt
on ankle in a sock no a knife not a rock i hoped the shit-is-wots-felt
i spit-for-my-health makes me better i aint gotta stick-for-my-wealth
i hope the world comes to their senses so they can see it-for-them-selves

Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 10:19 am
by TreTru
Well they say your 14 but your voice sounds low..it's cool though..
this was better than the free you did already gettin better..
I gotta be honest theres some stuff that dont really make sense..
and the quality is pretty bad...last but not least.......

nikkas say they rappin
^^^^^^^i heard the track and you said niggas...that's a hell no
dog on the real..don't go that route..alot of people say
that..but not if they're white...I'm assuming you are..
if you are black let me know but if your not that
shyt will cause you problems...
anyway keep droppin..

Posted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:46 pm
by - Mutual -
nah i said nikkas if i can find the acapella i'll get it too ya but thanks fo the feed