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Insomnia Rhymin'
Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 1:47 am
by The Gonz
Some 4 in the morning shit...
I refuse defeat, biters come chew and eat/
You spittin Nyquil, puttin these dudes to sleep/
Got em out cold like you put roofies in lines/
These cats are Starburst, beneath the "rapper" they're fruity inside/
Newly designed, I stay ahead of the trends/
I couldn't be twice as dope if I said this again/
End up dead from a pen, I'm blessed with text/
Erase yer lines in one move like an Etch-A-Sketch/
Who's next to flex, all the vets know the deal/
Put the heat to ya twice like leftover meals/
Head over heels, I love rap, dude's speakin the truth/
I'm an internet "icon" like the blue E with the hoop/
No reason to shoot, I sleep through yer gun shots/
Any cats tryin to "Pop" me, I keep tubes of "son" block/
Chumps plot, if they gettin brave, I'll let the stainless spray/
Try to snatch my "carrots", wake up in a vegetative state/
Feed please.
Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 2:22 am
by Lotus
you mad nice wit it... this shits full of creativity... solid through n through
that starburst shit lmao...
lol blowin up the cyphers too
Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 2:33 am
by Quix
shit came Hard! nice lil Rad Hommie!!
Flow was Illy, and some nice Content!
keep at it!
Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 2:34 am
by The Gonz
Lol thanks man, I was at work when I wrote that and had a bag of Starburst in front of me and thought I could make a punch using it.
Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:08 am
by Def-init
"I refuse defeat, biters come chew and eat/
You spittin Nyquil, puttin these dudes to sleep/
Got em out cold like you put roofies in lines/
These cats are Starburst, beneath the "rapper" they're fruity inside/"
That was ill man. I like.. Nice punches!!
Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 5:01 am
by Haz
The Flow Was Good , I Liked How you were Messin With your Rhymescheme's
Alot Of Played Concepts & Weaker Punches , But Shows your Abilty To Jump In tHe Punchline Game... Your Set Up's could Be Better & Same With Wordin
Other Then That
This Was a Straight Piece
Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 5:21 am
by The Gonz
'Preciate the feed. I've been cyphering too long so of course my similies and punches have suffered from it. Always room for improvement.
WTF
Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 9:44 am
by EvilJoey
How is this even Rap?
I mean u didnt say anything about Guns.. or bitches...
LOL...
I liked it tho ... few lines of fire for sure.
Go post another one ... Right Now!
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Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 10:50 am
by Haz
Guns Or Bitches?
Thats Played Out Rap Partna..
Get Ya Status Up
Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 6:47 pm
by The Gonz
He knows, he's just bein a sarcastic ass lol. More shit's on the way, Joe, you know that. Just been messin with the cypher shit since its more fun than actually writing a verse.
Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:33 pm
by TreTru
haha dass ill..diss shit is hott to me cause it's rappable like 123..
slap this on an audio...
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I refuse defeat, biters come chew and eat/
You spittin Nyquil, puttin these dudes to sleep/
Got em out cold like you put roofies in lines/
These cats are Starburst, beneath the "rapper" they're fruity inside/
^^^^^^^^sumbody said it but this shit was dope ^^^^^^^^^^
Re: WTF
Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 9:46 pm
by Def-init
EvilJoey wrote:How is this even Rap?
I mean u didnt say anything about Guns.. or bitches...
LOL...
I liked it tho ... few lines of fire for sure.
Go post another one ... Right Now!
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Listen here 50 cent... Go be fake else where rofl.
Gunz and Bitchz......ROFL
To quote Redman.
(The two things ur ass just dont get is Pussy and Respect!)
Wow....
Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 2:04 am
by EvilJoey
Wow...
Def-init Im Sorry... It was my fault for thinking most people have common scence
i assumed people would see the Sarcasim since i added a big LOL
it was a JOKE...
Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 2:06 am
by The Gonz
Refer to yer avatar lol.
Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 5:22 pm
by ScottJames
yeah bro..
i felt all them punches
they all hit hard n were creative as fuck..
way to stay consistent..
we shuld collab...get @ me inbox