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Begining tah End

Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 7:57 am
by Quix
a verse i did wid a cat named LArkin from Six/Goldmic





His verse was Ill, but this iz Just me!







Strated as a newb, but Grew to a Great
befriended a few catz, N let loose on dah fakez
sent a few trackz; Joined groups for Debatez
six called them crews, I Only new them as Bait
only a Few had dah Traitz to ammuse N get Praise
from the youth of this state; i went from Quixotic to Quix
people started Biting, changing styles; getting all Chaotic n shit
I then molded to Vexx, and catz stopped BOLDING THERE TEXT
disses and keys were getting Sold by dah sets;
by dah Ghostz AND ole vetz; dah fake foez, wid fake flowz i chose to neglect!
appointed a mod of a thread, by dah Boss of dah Sted!
won a bunch of thread battles but still a couple losses tah Shed!
NIKKUHZ, Switching there Styles, pretending wut they Grippin is Titles
sorry you ain't Winning this Trial! CATZ started and Elevated there Game
Chi money n Brutal BArz's heat, levatated tah Flamez! Itagrated there names
Quix slick too, often Irrated by lamez; Often 'Bring up shit' like Regergatation
Obsured and Blatent while mah theories often left tah guess at or Interpretations
Quix and Lark Disturb yah NAtion just Refer tah Ratings dah best of Earths Creations!
Now there some new catz like Scott n Fekt Droppin Text...Call this dah New Age
itz a New Place, wid New Greatz who Do MAke Yah Dudes Shake
from new Tastes....as well some New Fakes wid Deception and Trickery
but i still spit bout Real shit like Elections and Imagry
Politics have Symmirty, Rivalry has Reperacausions
Doubt one thing i jsut said, white bread will See Cocncusions

Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 12:18 pm
by precise
not bad man, interestin story lol, good flow, pretty straight forward rhymescheme so it was easy to follow

Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:48 am
by Quix
THANKS P ^

Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 5:01 am
by - Mutual -
nice i loiked this
the flow was pretty simple
but effective with this piece
the vocab was pretty good
no major multies or shit
it was an enjoyable read
pretty good well done on
this props
keep'em comin

Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:29 pm
by Quix
word ^ thankz Doggy!

Posted: Thu Dec 25, 2008 4:54 am
by complexity
I thought the story was effective as well. Some of the more complicated rhyme schemes I have seen from you. Its also good to see you do something more than just punchlines. I thought you narrated what by default is an extremely boring story and made it kinda exciting. Good job.

Posted: Sat Dec 27, 2008 2:20 am
by Quix
Thankz Plex...Preciate the feed!