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a couple scribbles from my notebook, tell me whatcha think



lets take a quick visual mystic spin into ritualistic sin
singing criminal rhythmic hymns enticing vivid subliminal twisted whims
sharpening n honing intellect, while displaying a minimalistic grin
cause when it comes to brains vs. braun.. its rare when physical fitness wins

surrounded by empty cigarette packages, this close to becomming a passionate massochist
lending my pen ta satan demonstratin what savage is while i massacre pacifists
and fuck equality, my syllables ravage it like the biblical passages n their cinnicle activists
the pinnicle fact is this: crusaders are the true haters.. defenition of what a facioust is
apparently the gap between good n evil.. really isnt a massive rift...

peagans? ill tackle these fragile freaks n shackle priests, then spray holy water on their entire fanatic facculties
ull never see the battle cease.. so ill send both sides to heaven by gassin cranes with acid rain, what a sight that'll be

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/the-u ... 11601.html

almost forgot my link

shit came nice dunny!! vocab was nice, flow was nice...nothing Amazing, or anything...but solid!1





keep at it!


good read

yeah this was pretty dope
nice vocab the flow was great
i loved the multies with the vocab
had a nice feel to it
man nice dope fire shit
keep'em comin

thank ya both for the feed

Nice man. it has been awhile since I have been on the site and read something from yeah

"surrounded by empty cigarette packages, this close to becomming a passionate massochist
lending my pen ta satan demonstratin what savage is while i massacre pacifists
and fuck equality, my syllables ravage it like the biblical passages n their cinnicle activists
the pinnicle fact is this: crusaders are the true haters.. defenition of what a facioust is "

Dope, bro.

Keep that shit up.