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One Blood Under .. S.A.W ..

Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 9:59 pm
by Brah-Vo
R.A.I rollin with the Ess Ay Dub
Kinda like diddy cuz imma press play cuz
And anyway you sorta like my Esse cuz ,
Ive been rollin with Arv since the day we was Cubs
Still feel like im daydreaming but i aint playin though
leave the lames weeping as ive tryna be slayin folks
i aint even playing though
Rell got skills that peeps should be paying Fo
And Miillz bring heat like he come from Miami
Aint talked to the dude but he still feel like family

Aint steppin to us ya'll Lost ya hope
I can still write prose and be considered dope
Come Lookin? You gon' find me
Aint take much for the Roc to sign me
Still fourteen and im takin the cake
one step ahead ive been fakin the fakes
But still i gotta put the brakes on and make songs
Coz from one Saw we be rippin the same lames
With one Saw we be tippin the same game over

We Rhyme, We Fly High Togetha
Like We Got some Feathers ..
All 4 One and One 4 All

Coz its One Blood Under Saw.

Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 10:08 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
Decent Drop Fam ..
Tha Flow Was Koo ..
I Liked Tha First Few Bars Tha Most For Some Reason ..
Tha Roc Line Was Koo too ..

But ..
Welcome to Tha Crew Though ..
You Have Grown Since I First Seen You ..
I Love ya Flow & Tha Creativity is On Point Wit all ya Other Dudes ..
I`m Glad U Wit Tha Team ..

Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 10:10 pm
by Brah-Vo
Thanks bruh .
This was key'd quick, No Excuses Though lol.
Thanks for lettin me join

Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 12:04 am
by Miilz
Yeah Welcome To S.a.W Yeah For Some Reason i Felt The First Paragraph The Most. Drop Was Good, Not The Best, But The Flow Was Good, The Punches Were a Lil Simple But it's All Good Though. u Should Stay Throughout Ya Whole Verse 2 Syllables, it Makes The Verse Seem More Creative And More Enjoyable Reading. Anyways Welcome To S.a.W And Keep Practicing.

Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 12:19 pm
by Arvincible
nice...lol welcome fam, im glad rell saw the talent in you.

i agree with miilz on the first part standing out. flows nice man.