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Elevated

Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 5:47 am
by - Mutual -
prepare to fight-to-death,right-to-left
ya scared so bite-the-meth,i hide-my-wreck
i got my violent-tech around my silent-steps
my hands is still around these tryants-neck
u all try to rattle-my-cage i aint scared i battle-for-days
cus u stand out black & white like cattle-that-graze
i'll just leave u differnt oranges like that'll-ablaze
like i haggle-my-stage but no-negotiations
i smoke-these-stations who think there hard revoke-vaccations
vaccinations no one can track-my-patience
like doctors i attack-so-blatent so u haters get back-to-hatin
try to-trap-disgracin emcees who dont react-when-facin
the greatest rapper hip hop will ever see
you'll never-be, clever-G i'm meant-to-be-cool
beat me dead i come back as another entity-fool
i was-sent-for-these-fakes make'em repent-what-they-take
goin so "fast" like-lent-come-in-late
my maze-of-ability thru my abbrasive-posterity
a daze-of-hostility wooah strange-ya-not-feelin-me
i am the only MUTUAL HOSTILITY
kill'n em all watch out now that i've lost-enemies

http://www.soundclick.com/player/single ... i&newref=1

feed is appreciated and will be returned
and this is off my first audio is the chamber

Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 10:15 am
by - Mutual -
well feed would be appreciated

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 3:23 pm
by precise
not to bad, the rhymes were allright but nothin really stood out to me, keep at it

Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 7:08 pm
by Arvincible
nice, you kept to a nice rhymescheme and flow, this is by far the best ive seen from you man, u went from a 2 to a 5 outta ten imo. good shit and keep this mentality going, thats how i got fired up. good shit keep it up fam.