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I told ya'll I'd post the audio for my drop in scriptures..It's actually
in wma form so the quality is shitt but you should get the picture..
it's more an emotional than a lyrical piece..anyway ..get@me








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edit to drop the lyrics in..

HOOK x 2

i'll make you proud momma..this ones FOR YOU
i know they gon' feel me now momma...your words WERE-TRUE
even when my little tears were flowin down like a RIVER
you said, keep ya CHIN UP never GIVE UP youll be a WINNER



we'd go to parties while they were drinkin right after DIN-NER
Mom would play Ukelele and backups i'd be the lead SIN-GER
and we'd go through different MEDLEYS singin SWEET-MEL-OD-IES
it put's my mind at ease thinkin of SWEET-MEM-O-RIES
and you alway's CARED even if you werent always THERE
no we never really had much but I was always FED
single mother cause my daddy couldn't be all he SAID
alway's got into trouble so my ass was alway's RED
years later when I called him up well ALL-HE- SAID
he gave another son my name like i was ALMOST DEAD
at first I hated'em dont hate'ems what my MOMMA SAID
and now when I look back at it i ALMOST give a SHIT
I drop it like a bad habit and ROLL TO THE NEXT
feelin like I should have an S-SEWN-TO-MY-CHEST
i gotta thank the lord above cause I am TRU-LY BLESSED
from the GUT-TER to all BUT-TER baby cause TRU-BE-BEST


HOOK x 2

i'll make you proud momma..this ones FOR YOU
i know they gon' feel me now momma...your words WERE-TRUE
even when my little tears were flowin down like a RIVER
you said keep ya CHIN UP never GIVE UP youll be a WINNER



and now my MO-TTO mash it full THRO-TTLE and NO-SUR-REN-DER
I overflo'eth the cup cause i boil i DONT-SIM-MER
out in the 808 region is where my SOUL-LIN-GERS
keep reppin that H.I. state til I got COLD-FIN-GERS
I still aint rich i aint gotta worry bout GOLD-DIG-GERS
drive a hundred miles to the studio in a FOUR-LITER
to get up on the mic and breathe fire like GOD-ZILLA
dedicatin KIL-LER hours to be the TOP-BILLER
ROCK-EM KNOCK-EM i'm ILL-ER POP-N-HOT yes i'll GRILL-YA
TRE-TRU out the pacific BLUE and yes I keep it REAL-ER
quik to DE-LIV-ER, we do it sicker in the PAC-IF-IC
9-6-7-4-0 is the CODE to be SPE-CI-FIC
it took a HARD-MIN-UTE but now i put my HEART-IN-IT
I speak truths IN-FIN-ITE SPIT-IT-WITH no GIM-MICKS
and for all them HATERS and them CRIT-ICS that dont GET-IT
this song was written to thank my momma thats why i DID-IT

HOOK x 2

i'll make you proud momma..this ones FOR YOU
i know they gon' feel me now momma...your words WERE-TRUE
even when my little tears were flowin down like a RIVER
you said keep ya CHIN UP never GIVE UP youll be a WINNER


copyrights
TreTru 2007
Island Mojo Productions..

this was pretty dope shit
i liked the flow
the beat was dope i thought
ya kept ya consistency didnt fall off
man keep'em comin
this was good overall

Thanks Dawg..I made the beat and everything myself off a old
zoom zoom streetbox..kinda grunge haha..
mixxed it and all..I'm tryin ta level up on my production skills too..
I know it's kinda trippy cause my shit is different..anyway any feed will be appreciated..
Holla

Not a bad beat...a lil repeatative from start to finish, but it's more about lyrical content than beat nd I gotta say...you definately brought the beat alive with your words. Real emotional and to the heart...one of the nicer drops I've heard in the Chamber in a while.
It's was clear and clean for the most part, true, some parts of the mixing could use some polishing...but you can hear it word for word which is all that matters in the end.
Great drop and thanx for sharing it wit the rest of us to enjoy. Keep droppin in the Chamber!

right on man I'll be droppin more for ya'll in the furture I'm startin with my older tracks and eventually I'll put the new ones on..
thanks for the feedback..yeah that zoom was kinda limited but it did the job then....

uppin for more feed

yo homie dis shit is hott right here yo u got off da track on u snapped on da beat much props liked wat u did wit it dis track stands out in da Chamber u spit sum tru shit right here if u ever wanna collab holla at a nigga dawg on da real tho dis was a sick as drop homie keep droppin sum more hott shit wanna hear more 4rm u dawg

right on man..much respect for the props..yeah I'm down to colab dawg..it's whatever..let me know..uppin for more feed!!

shits tight....definatley gots truth to wat u spit...da mixing and wat not..was straight...obviously coulda been a bit more clearer...but it was blended well enough that it wasnt an obstuction...keep droppin man..def like to see u drop more

thanks dawg!! I'll drop another track soon..I really appreciate the
feed..I shoulda been droppin audios from the beginning cause I'm not
a text-cee..anyaway be on the lookout..


uppin for more feed!!

lol i agree the beats repetative, but repetative generally makes it catchy

sick track, i definately like your flow, this is only the second song of yours ive heard but u seem consistant with quality, im lookin forward to hearin whatever else u cook up lol keep em commin

thanks precise...I'll check out your beats in a sec too.. I'll
drop you some feed when I can thanks alot dawg..
uppin for more feed.

thanks alot man..i make some of my songs for the radio market..
we actually get radio play out here..but not this song..


uppin..

Nice work man, that's crazy you used the streetboxx I have one of those too. If you wanted some different styles of music check me out. WWW.MYBEATSHOP.COM/SGBEATZ

Keep doin' your thing.

^^ayy thanks alot fam...I never saw this post ..
i'll peep it out 4 sure..thanks..

wow im really lovin diss.. i definately feel those lyrics, it makes me think bout my own moms! da beats sick too. im excited ta hear more