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The Fine perched Raiders grasping a plaid handkerchief..
in the skys first layer on a Vast Anchored ship
where the black angels live..
Watching the vast vapors sift,past the gas chambers mist
Toying with bookworms held from a Mad angler fish..Relaxed;angered stiff
Weilding a slash Tapered fin,crafted to reel through a septic lagoon
In A psyche so hectic and screwed that it'd appeal to a skeptic bafoon
Or a leather necked arab,with a featherless parrot on his shoulder blade
Next to a treasure chest of gold grenades..paired with tons of Solar rays
Following a frozen page listing solus names..
Of folks on the road to shame,gliding the empyrean on a Broken crane
I take one look at the world from my reviews focal length posture
To find bloakeish strained authors soaked in rain water..
Who'd note their time altering tension..
Through mind tauntering wisdom..
Waiting for one eye opening opportunity a cyclops could invison..
The prime thought is just sickening; one alone couldn't stand to stop revival
But glance upon their idols garbed for Cantopop recitals..
While they danced to songs on tiles lost in lifeless tunes
As their righteous mood and night resumed with wine consumed..
Later to vanish into a haze of smog on Chariots led by unicorns
Managing to escape the ball..once the Coaches fairly met and blew the horn..[/font][/align]

ohh dude this was fire
straight dope no doubt about
it had very good complexity filled up with vocab
the flow was fire
some of the metas were dope
man this was a great man probably easily one of ya writtens could've been a classic

thanks for the feed man.

this was dope as hell man, really nice strong tone, not common, and unique vocab to give an extra spice to the atmosphere you made..i loved it fam good shit.
ur a really talented lyricist.


keep posting more of this man

thanks man i appreciate it honestly..loving the feed im getting so far.

damn man, i loved this, seems sorta like a spoken word piece, n reminds me of saul williams with a little bit of sage francis, very well written

thanks for the feed deeply appreciated.

This aint rap. This is beyond rap. This is poetry.
Dope as hell man.
Real talk i aint even kissin ass. Illest classic anyone? :S

thanks man i appreciate that dearly.

dude.. i post the same piece on a few sites too.. get more feed that way.. and keeps each on active.. ya digg?.. im sure everyone does that..

everyone does do that..they just dont recycle battle verses against people and say there doing the same shit as getting feed..fuck outta here with flooding my thread young bul.