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Marvelous

Don't try to fuck with me….I'm way ahead of the game!!

I'm the only one close to wild
So Marvelous, I should be Stan Lee's poster child
Keep my eyes on foes, watch them closely now
You think I'm proposin' when the toast is out
Blao, now I'll cap & then bury ya
You gon need a shield that's bigger than Captain America's
& I'll always be ready in a blink for war
With so much hammers, you would think I'm Thor
& the infred makes craters when I bomb
I'm Iron Man, cuz I keep laser on my palms
Them gauges make me calm when I pop, you'll die
Tell them haters I'll be gone 'fore the cops arrive
Then hop in rides with your milf, & serve her
Flying Spurs' same color as the Silver Surfer
“Flame Onâ€
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Post by HKX »

haha dis nigga yo sick drop son liked wat u did wit all them Marvel characters lol u got off kid enjoyed readin dis mad punchlines on dis shit keep droppin dawg wanna read more shit 4rm u
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Post by Quix »

Dr. Jekyll/Mr. Hyde; 2 manners it switches/(yeah)
I'll Hulk your ass or Bruce Banner you bitches/(whoa


Whoa is right.....that is PURE HOMO!!!! Smh




didn't see many punchlines...but was decent since yah used all those heros!



line above is GAYYYYYYY tho! lol
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yeah this was a great read i liked all the heroes and the title MARVELous it was done well and maintained on topic sum of the punches were pretty straight dope shit but year like quix said that line was a bit strange but i dont think gaay like he says
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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