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Mos Def:Man, you hear this bullshit they be talkin'
Every day, man
It's like these motherfuckers is just like professional liars
YouknowwhatI'msayin? It's wild
Listen

[Hook - Mos Def]
Bin Laden didn't blow up the projects
It was you, nigga
Tell the truth, nigga
(Bush knocked down the towers)--[Jadakiss]
Tell the truth, nigga
(Bush knocked down the towers)--[Jadakiss]
Tell the truth, nigga

Bin Laden didn't blow up the projects
It was you, nigga
Tell the truth, nigga
(Bush knocked down the towers)--[Jadakiss]
Tell the truth, nigga
(Bush knocked down the towers)--[Jadakiss]


[Gorilla Mist]
Fuck Government Sell's I Rather Be The Nigga Caught With Ah Shell.
Them Niggas you run with can put you in jail and couldnt Give Up Money For You Bail.
I'll Learn To Be One Man Set Free. With Ah Killer Spree You Really Ain't Feeling Me.
Giving Up In The Fire of The Third Degree I Dont Follow USA Signs So Propaganda Don't Phase Me.
Just Playing with the fucking Religion Bush Couldnt Set It Apart! So He Took Airlines
To Set The Warfare To A Fuckin Dark!.Knowing it's Illuminati In His Heart!.
Luficer Raising From The Fire of The Towers Tho We all Know Obama Has No Power.
With no Ecomony Shower's. And Ock's On The Block Spray Out like New Spring Flower's.!
Can't Trust Noone..! You fucked Up.! You Just Left A Board
The President Is Fucking Nosiy. Monkey..Yeah You Curious George.!(get it?)
Gorilla Already Knew Was Wassup. You Just Got A Fucking Bad Luck.
As You know I'll You In Hole Of America Yeah you've been Stucked As A Toddler I Knew The Eco
Was Fucked
[Hook]

[Immortal Technique]
I pledge no allegiance, nigga fuck the president's speeches
I'm baptized by America and covered in leeches
The dirty water that bleaches your soul and your facial features
Drownin' you in propaganda that they spit through the speakers
And if you speak about the evil that the government does
The Patriot Act'll track you to the type of your blood
They try to frame you, and say you was tryna sell drugs
And throw a federal indictment on niggaz to show you love
This shit is run by fake Christians, fake politicians
Look at they mansions, then look at the conditions you live in
All they talk about is terrorism on television
They tell you to listen, but they don't really tell you they mission
They funded Al-Qaeda, and now they blame the Muslim religion
Even though Bin Laden, was a CIA tactician
They gave him billions of dollars, and they funded his purpose
Fahrenheit 9/11, that's just scratchin' the surface
[Hook]
(I don't rap for dead presidents
I'd rather see the president dead
It's never been said but I set precedents)--[Eminem]


End~

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Ya verse mad me laugh . It was Koo homie . Nothin special, but pretty dope .
Nice work my dude .

7.5/10.
Enjoyed the read.

Yeah Thanks Fam

I was just playing with the flow.

Uppin..!

this had me confused for a bit lol. had to read it twice. yeah your verse was good. flow was there. i was feelin the whole conspiracy theory topic. a couple bits i didnt understand but its all good

Just Playing with the fucking Religion Bush Couldnt Set It Apart! So He Took Airlines
To Set The Warfare To A Fuckin Dark!.Knowing it's Illuminati In His Heart!.
Luficer Raising From The Fire of The Towers Tho We all Know Obama Has No Power.
^^^^
my favourite bit. this topics been done before but it was reasonably original. 7.5/10

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man this was nice
as Cee said it has been done before
it was a good read tho
nice flow with originality
stayed on topic
keep'em comin

Thanks Homie.!

Keep Comments and Rates Coming.

It was pretty good dogg....cee's right the concepts been done but
conscious is what it is and it's necessary..
the song itself is dope so 8.0/10

uppin thanks for the feed

Eh... I think the flow was choppy as hell. I'm not even sure what you were saying half the time, you were all over the place and had a bunch of filler, not to mention the poor structure with lines getting cut early and running in the next line. Not trying to fuck up your day, just trying to keep it real and help a fellow emcee out. Personally, I don't feel that including Immortal's verse was necessary at all. You could have just made it your own verse. I think there's plenty of room for improvement. On the other hand, its nice to see another verse that isn't plagued with gunplay, money, or struggling in the ghetto.

Ight thanks

Uppin!