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First Drop Here... 4 bars..
Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 9:28 pm
by TheCh3mist
read the rules for battling on here n said u had to drop somethin in these forums, so i just keyed up 4 bars super quick..
Ayo!..
soooo.. all u HOES WIT TIGHT.. FLOWIN WRITES.. get 'STONED WIT PIPES'.. like your BLOWN N HIGH.. but NOTICE, I.. 'got the illestlyrics' so ofcourse ima “OWN THIS SITEâ€
Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 2:52 pm
by Brah-Vo
Sup new comer,
For a quickie it was dope. You gotta nice simple flow, u gotta grasp of multis and u had good punches. Though it seems some multis didnt match up syllables at times but thats iight.
Keep up.
Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 3:15 pm
by TreTru
I read it..it's pretty good..lots of multis, story line was consistent
throughout so dope for a keystyle..
soooo.. all u HOES WIT TIGHT.. FLOWIN WRITES.. get 'STONED WIT PIPES'.. like your BLOWN N HIGH.. but NOTICE, I.. 'got the illestlyrics' so ofcourse ima “OWN THIS SITEâ€
Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 3:59 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
This Shit Was Pretty Dope ..
i Liked That Broken Rod Shit That Was New ..
Least Favorite Was Tha End, it Wasn`t Up to Par Wit Tha Rest Of Tha Bars ..
But Nice Tho For a Quick Key,
Can`t Wait to See U Battle ..
Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 1:32 pm
by TheCh3mist
preciate the feedback fellaz, n i did this shit mad quick ahah, this aint nothin to what i usually spit, just put up somethin just to be able to battle ahah, but good looks, if any of ya'll need feed returned, hit up my inbox, 1..
Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 1:54 pm
by ScottJames
^stop frontin, u know u stayed in on Friday night to write these bars..
LoL
verse was dope though.
consistent
thorough.
nice.
im hungover////
Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 2:30 pm
by TheCh3mist
^lol, hell naw bro ahahah, i got fucked up on friday, im not hungover though, cuz i woke up n started drinkin again ahahah, good looks though brotherin..