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okay this is a battle of Multies
and i added a Cat just too spice it up
6 Bars

4 Cats:
Flow
Rhyme Scheme
Consitency
Vocabulary

verses due 24 hrs after all checks

this is my CHECK

good luck too u Koms

hm alright check, i like uneven cats that way there's no tie or some shit u know, but n e ways we'll see how this goes, i like wat u did with the 3 way i was thinkin 2 seperate battles but i wouldn't wanna rack up wins like that so this works out nicely, goodluck to u both

oh jesodist was removed off this? alright then, i'll work on it within the next hour probably since i only got 3 hours to post before its late

good luck to both u guys
here we go

i'm amazing-with-elegance so full of patience-n-relevance
i'm dark evil ageless-n-intelligence u lack greatness-an-eloquence

trapped by my maze-of-embelishment leave u in graves-i'm-so-decodant
what u say-is-irrelevant beat u with words of rock i'm fatal-with-elements

how do u take-your-defeat u hate-to-get-beat i'm desercratin-all-ya-spirits
hittin-mates-quit ure spittin-straight-shit the way i'm defocatin-on-ya-lyrics

i'm waitin fo my moment-of-rest-mine u roamin-with-breath-crimes ya lyrics got us groanin-fo-death-lines
my skills elevatin i'm honin-the-test-shrines of owning-my-stressed-mind cant help cloanin-my-best-rhymes

i'm come prepared-with-swords amazed i know you all-stare-of-course ya lyrics like a fable-of-truth
back up u get a-rare-applause excited ya-scared-of-sorts loser i gave u a nametag like i label-the-proof

i'll leave u graspin-my-hair like a celeb but i'll be the last-one-u-scare so hang-on-this-note
cus you'll be maskin-ya-lair my rhymes leave u gaspin-fo-air when i first bang-on-ya-throat

okay i know it got a bit worse at the end but i think i did alright
uppin Koms

my bad for the delay i started packin n lost track of the time

u TOAST! now watch me BUTTER-this-thread, won't shudder-to-SPREAD, kid i stay~protected...my rubber-is-lead,
u already covered-in-red, weak opponents..another is dead, mutual INCEST.. so he pays~for~SEX~,WITH HIS MOTHER-instead,

Mutual.. u ain't HOSTILE u barely-AGGRESSIVE, not very-impressive, still couldn't deliver good results if u carefully-tested,
this "Messiah" don't care-to-be-messed-with, cuz he sucks,but on the contrary-the-best-is..STILL NOT YOU! so spare-me-the-'message'

easy puns but i'm too creative-to-hit, my rhymes more related-to-wits, so intelligent i leave u degraded-to-shit,
mute too hesitated-to-spit like i've elevated-to-CRIP, see no competition cuz i'm just about as great-as-it-gets,

u easy to piss off like instigatin-a-child, u ain't BLOOD, u fake like u sin-with-hate-n-a-smile,
u ain't meant for keys cuz when u spit-it's-breakin-the-dial, ur just another fan that's imitatin-my-style,

sorry for not hearin i don't listen-to-nuisance, i've been too busy dissin-thru-u-since the minute i've diminished-confusions,
end this like finished-conclusions, but i hope u don't cry n be a bitch-when-u-losin, cuz showing ur true self still isn't-improvement,

i text-with-a-fee, been-pressin-a-spree since the invention-of-keys, mutual like mexican-thieves, spittin multis as an impression-of-E,
i come addressin-the-street, not the mention-a-speech to cause attention-beneath, cuz as far as i can see ur just stretchin-to-be another reflection-of-me

sorry bout the lines being a a lil long, n e ways nice drop

nice verse ya self
uppin votes

Damn both of yall killed it loL..

Flow - Mutual...Ekoms' longer bars made the flow a little less smooth
Rhyme Scheme - Ekoms...dude's rhyme scheme was dope as hell
Consitency - Ekoms...Mutual fell off a bit at the end...
Vocabulary - this was a pretty close category...while Mutual had the better words, Ekoms just seemed to use his words better...at a certain point, like the 4th bar...mutual started to appear as if he was forcing multi strings a bit too much


Overall - Ekoms gmv by a nut hair

count it or not...it's up to you...but there's my opinion

Flow - Definitely Mutual..
Rhyme Scheme - Ekoms...Held More Relevancy IMO
Consistency - Both...Ekoms kinda Slacked At The Beginning..But Came Hard Later..And Mutual Came Hard At The Beginning And Started To Plumit
Vocab - Ekoms Definitely Utilized His Dictionary Skills LoL

Overall Vote Ekoms..Great read by both sides tho.. Mutual you've really elevated..LoL guess i have to pay more attention to Illest...

think it was from all his cyphering, i missed out on when he improved lol, didn't notice till he dropped a scripture, definitely a change of scenery for the battle grounds

2-0

damn I cant vote yet but yeah both ya'll did good..

thanks fo the votes 2-0
thanks fo the praise
i didnt realise i'd elevated so much until i actually took the time to compare both verses here n i realised Koms may have taken it but if this was two months ago it prolly would've been cat sweeps all the way

but yeah uppin K.O or comeback

Flow EKO
Rhyme Scheme EKO
Consitency EKO
Vocabulary EKO


i thought Eko took this in every category..
his flow was on point, his multis rhymed n matched up much better than MH's..
plus EK had some punches in there in which the other dude didnt...


i text-with-a-fee, been-pressin-a-spree since the invention-of-keys, mutual like mexican-thieves, spittin multis as an impression-of-E,
i come addressin-the-street, not the mention-a-speech to cause attention-beneath, cuz as far as i can see ur just stretchin-to-be another reflection-of-me

best bar^^


VOTE: EK

lol punches were useless in this battle, but i wanted to come more direct i guess,

n e ways -closed and updated- good battle mutual u definitely got a lot better