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Pt 2 of our battle
Flow leads the seris 0-1
this is a straight dissing Track
Track length 2:30 Max

No flipping
House Voting and Rules
Due in a week of Check ins

Cats:
Flow
Punches
Presence

sound good?
If not can work with it

good lookin out on ur track flow

****Admin those cats look legit?

Gyea, Datz Fyne By Me.

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Ma Computa Wuz Actin' Bitch-Made & Still Is..
So...I Couldn't Make It As Good As I Wanted 2
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Try Ta Look Past Da Quality..
Otha Den Da Quality & Some Air In The Mic Here & There, It's Str8..
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[font=Georgia]+His Gamer Tag Is "TBurns4Life"
+He Made A Song Called "More Than Friends"
+His Avy Says "Gods Given Curse"
+His Sig Says "Enter The Dead Zone"
+His Rec Losses Is 25
+His Sig Also Says "Don't Get Shit Twizted"
+On Dead Silence The Movie, That Old Lady Ripped Out Peoples Tounges
"I'll Rip Out Ya Tounge, Don't Speak Bitch", Get It?[/font]

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[font=Georgia](Intro)
Illestlyrics.com
Yung Flow Vs Dead Silence
Ya'll Know What It Iz
Dis Yuh Boy Yung Flow
Finna Put 'Em In His Coffin'
So Uh..
Lets Get Dis Poppin
Yep!
Uh-Huh!

(Verse 1-Yung Flow)
Who The Hell Is This Boy?!?, He Must Be Stupid
You Ain' No Task Ta Me, Immah Teacher, You A Student
So Pay Attention Pussy & Take Notes
You Wack As Fuck, You Ain' Gettin' No Votes
Insane With The Flow, Slice Open Yuh Throat
After I Body You, It'll Be Murder-He-Wrote
Get Off The Site, And Find A New Hobby
Sayin' "Man, Im So Good, But Kurse Won't Even Sign Me!"
Shut Up Bitch Boy, I'll Put You In A Hearse
Its Clear, Yuh Shitty Rhymes Are "Gods Given Curse"
My Punches Are Deadly, I'll Hitchu Where It Hurts
Soundin' Like A Female, Dis Nikka Prolly Wearin' A Skirt
You Missin' Shots, Im Dodgin' All Yuh Strikes
I'll Send 'Em Ta Hell And Make "TBurn4Life"
You Takin' A L, Im Gainin' Win
Stop Cryin Bitch, Nobody Wanna Be "More Then Yuh Friend"

(Talkin')
You Cant See Me Kid
Haha, Fuck A Hook
Im Shittin' On You Son
Step Yuh Game Up
Itz Round 2
I Hope You Gotcha Game Right
Haha
I Own You Bruh
Itz A Done Deal
Chea, Chea, Chea, Chea
Letz Get It

(Verse 2-Yung Flow)
Stop Rappin' Kid, Nobody Wants 2 Play Yuh Shit
Even Fa Deaf People, It Ain' Even Worth It
I'll Rip Out Yuh Tounge, Don't Speak Bitch
I'll Grab Yuh Cd, Den Wipe My Ass Wid It
Yeah Fuck It, I Know Im Rude
But Listen Up, You Cant Beat Me Dude
25 + 1, Datz How Much You Finna Lose
Yuh Record Sucks More Den You Do
And I'm Shittin On You, Datz A Known Fact
If Im Entering Yuh Dead Zone, You Betta Fall Back
And Itz Not A Secret, You Scared 2 Record Tracks
Im Finna Eat Cha Rhymes, Like A Midnight Snack
Get Outta Hea Dog, You Ain' A Competitive Match
You A Lame Nikka, And Lames I Smash
Why You Rappin' Kid, When You Can't Even Do Math
"Don't Get Shit Twisted", You Garbage I'll Put In Da Trash
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wow..talk about gettin son'd!

(sorry for tha free post,, but damn, homie merked him, theres no need for dude to reply)

[font=Georgia]C'mon G...Itz A Week Today
Post Up, Please Don't Ho-Show..[/font]

how does this dood have flow when hes young?//
tried to be more than friends that shit was dumb//*
Kid tried to go ahead and do the same track as me//
it wasnt even official so i decided to let him flee//
Call me kurse, on how im shutting you down//*
put u in a Hurst and drag ur ass thru town//
You seem to be good at flowing on old Tracks//*
If viral wasnt nice hed diss you right back//

Young flow is his name//
howd he get in the game//
Ur flow is weak, im topping ur peak//
Ill End ur Streak, Flows gotta leak//
Some one has gots to try to fix em//
Cant be done because no one listens//*

Give you battle scars and leave u smoked//*
Ill rattle ya jars and live u choked//
Cant even afford to have a rank//*
This has got to be wrong or a bad prank//
You wont kill me again like in ur dream//*
because when reality hits ill make you scream//*
im dont even wanna fucking with the south//*
Fuck with me again and its Lights Out!//

* in order
Did a song to the same beat as me to More Than Friends
Kurse shut down IHH
Did a 2 tracks with the same beat me and viral used (more than friends and battle scars)
see above and Ekoms was in it and his name spelled backwards is Smoke
Still has the standard Illest Rank
Last Round hes dreaming about a killer
Claimed to kill the killer in his track in the last round
Avy is Ti who is from the south

i dont no sho w.o notice

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Nyce Track Silence

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thanks you two

UPPIN!

i give it to young flow

his punches were harder
he held more presence on the beat
youngs flow was more on

Dead silence you need to work on your flow

vote young

flow - first verse had some nice shit, closer was the only stretched flow..
on second verse flow was pretty awesome.. punches where simple and personals wernt used effectively.. though as an audio it was well done and very listenable.. presence and emotion where good and beat was cool too

dead - at the start when you talking lyrics are real low..
you needa read the lines faster, or spit em faster lol.. either way the pauses are killing the verse.. punches simple again..
the hook is okay.. nothing great..
2nd verse was better, plays could have been good but wording crushed any hope of good hits.. beat is okay..

vote - flow.. easier to listen.. better flow.. punches where cool.. multis where good, presence was better.. dead had better ideas, but didnt pull them off well..

both of ya'll could get at me to improve ya lyricsm... im willing to help..

overall - vote - young flow

Thanks Mark

I would like to disregard Moderns vote
i havnt seen the dood till now

i would like Ppl to vote that have been on here for some time and is respectable
you all know what im gettin at.

Allowed?

[font=Georgia]^ I Feel You

Modern's Vote Wont Be Counted

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