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Drum Audio collects ear.
Closer Gather objects near.
Vivid Expect sounds clear.
Board Wave rebound clip
Mental Stash echo equip
stumble Repeat aero trip
Math Anticipate compounds trig
Let protein pounds pig
wHole Hounds presume dig
break Expect doom dip

carbon accelerate
Quick assassinate.
skull resume
Review zoom.
Consume bone
Fracture zone.
Continue struggle
Duel jungle.
destroy throne
Sit cyclone.
Phone devour
Swalllow sour.
King decoy
Bait annoy.
board power

Top dog and still the last.
Tar has destoyed the crop.
Dish limit has been surpassed.
Juice consume to cure bacterial.
June is the month to seduce.
drink milk after your done with the cereal.
Dip your head in a book think.

it's new alright

hm, its different, like a form of simplicity, used as simplicity, seemed like it could be poetic but hard to say, it was interesting with the lines shortened like that.. i felt like it was narrative the way u did it, so in some odd way i kinda liked it, can't say i'd want to read another one like it tho lol no offense, after a while it felt like i was just reading words that happened to rhyme.. like there was no story bein told, yet it kinda did.. i have no clue honestly haha im still tryin to figure out the middle piece

epic Fail

Different kinda piece i seen. mad short lines. it seems like more of a poem imo.

Unique

It .... rhymed.. poetis rhyhm and transfers. but I didn't get the message .
the beginning is the best part...