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[font=Georgia]Aight..First Imma Start Off By.. This 1 Called "More Then Friends" I Seen Ol' Dude Dead Silence Do A Track 2 This Beat

BUT.. No Offense Ta Dude, But I Think I Did It Better Overall & Stayed With The Concept Plus It Was Dedicated Ta Somebody But, Idk Ya'll Can Decide..[/font]

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[font=Georgia]Aight..This One's Like My View-Point On A Situation Dealing Wit Dis Chick I Was Seein' Fa A Good Min
But Shit Didn't Turn Out So Good
Hence The Name "Played Me For A Fool"
Playa Made On The Hook[/font]


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Dis 1's If You Like Southern Shit, Ma Nigga Eclipse Drug Me Into Dis 1
But..Da Beat Hits, Maybe Somethin' You Could Bump In Da Ride..
Dumbass Name Though, "Trunk Go Boom" Lol..[/font]


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This One's "20 Grand In My Pocket" Feat Eclipse..
Ya Kno, Typical Commercial Shit,
Ehh..
But Its A Str8 Track In My Opinion, Idk Ya'll Can Decide[/font]


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This 1's Jus' A Typical "Shorty You So Fine" Kindah Joint
But Im Tlkin Bout Ma Shorty, Idk Who Da Otha Nigga Tlkin' About
It Was An Open Collab So I Hopped On It[/font]


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[font=Georgia]This One's Just A Dedication Track, Feat. Mafiosa
Damn..This Shit Was Awhile Back
But Its Jus' Like Inspiration Shit I Guess..[/font]


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[font=Georgia]Sorry For The Long List Lolz
But Feed Is Appreciated. [/font]

Soooooooo many tracks too feed, so little time. haha

Wow.

Well I'm just going to give you constructive critisism on what you need to work on altogether instead of breaking it down song-4-song.

1st- Quality: Definately need either a better mic or you need some better mixing over there.

2nd- Presentation: You don't sound 100% confident behind the mic, like some lyrics you can tell are being read at times, where other times it they seem find. But you need to find your comfort zones. Once you find that, you'll hear a large improvement in your drops.
It's lil things ya need to work-out on in the meantime, just be patient and keep droppin.

shit was decent but yea Kurse was right u need a better mic, da mixin is all krazy need 2 amp it up on dat, u need 2 blaze da mic a lil more practice ur shit b4 u drop n e thing cuz it sounds like ur bored on da mic homie, when it comes 2 recordin its like fightin wit someone verbally like if u beef wit a nigga in da streets or a fam member u don't wanna sound dull, like da beats u fucked wit da last one was pretty dope, keep droppin and practice a lot u should be fine

Songs Aint Bad, Kurse Explained What You Needed Improvement On. What's The Name Of That Last Beat? But Yeah, Just Put More Emotion in Ya Songs? But if You Need Better Mixing ..You Should Let Me Mix it. Anyways Keep On Practicin And Droppin Ya Audios.

yo is this the same young flo i collaborated with?