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Goes Around Comes Around feat Oph White
Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 9:09 am
by JollyJay
first verse and hooks - JollyJay (me)
2nd verse - Oph White
http://www.myspace.com/jollyjayspits
id highly appreciate some feed here!
Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 6:01 am
by JollyJay
damm i thougt this forum was nice with feed...
Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 3:15 pm
by Lawgix
damn this is a really laid back type of track man.... u did a real good job... real good job on the hook br0... oph white wasn't too bad... loved the lyrics man really... hard to find songs with that emcee type of beat... good job man
i'd rate it a 8/10 i liked it
Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2008 11:10 pm
by JollyJay
thanks man... uppin
Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 5:44 am
by - Mutual -
yeah man was tight pretty good rhymes from both delivery went well keep'em comin
Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:01 am
by HKX
good shit kid track wasn't dat bad shit was nice u need 2 ante up on ur myspace friends tho lol add more niggaz so they could hear ur shit
Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 8:47 am
by Yung_Flow
[font=Georgia]Damn...Honestly, Immah Be Real I Don't Like Uk Rappers 2 Much, But Im Deff Feelin' Dis Joint
Lyrics, Flow, & Da Hook Was All On Point
Yuh Boy Did His Thinq On Hea 2
Nyce Shit Fammo
Keep On Droppin'
Be Easy
.UnO.[/font]
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 1:37 am
by JollyJay
thanks man... uppin
Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2008 11:02 pm
by JollyJay
ups?
Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2008 11:41 pm
by Onediversekid
Duuude this shit was dooope, keep it coming. Your voice really lends itself well to rap, so don't stop.
Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 1:18 am
by JollyJay
^good looks man... appreciate the listen.
Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 2:50 am
by Onediversekid
Yeah man, if you ever wanna collab on a song.. give me a shout.. I'm always looking for new artists to work with.
Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 5:28 am
by Glamtrash
Not bad dude, you've got potential. 7/10.
Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 7:40 am
by JollyJay
^thanks, any more opinions?