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Its Not About Money & Whips Or Honeys With Tit's, you Sit-Strugglin
Quit-Hustlin,Don't Destroy-Ya-health..Take a Deeper Dive Into Lifes Meaning... ENJOY-YA-SELF...

Nice Closure. That Money An Whips Line was Pretty Dope. Over All Good Flow.
Stay At It

-.HaZarD.- wrote:I Go Balistic-Days, Abusinn-Weed-With-Friends ..
These Simplistic-Ways ,Usen-Need-Ta-End...
Once i Take a Breather-Ive Learned Amongst Us The Reapers-Live
We 'See Levels' Of Complexity But Need Ta Take a Deeper-Dive...
Go-Past The Black-&-White Even The Shade-Of-Gray,Let Thoughts
Flow-Fast,The Lack-Of-Light Will Soon Fade-Away..Potray The Day
As a Page From Your Years-Chapter,The Meaning Of Being gets Clear-Faster,
Its 2 Enjoy Every Moment Never Fear-Laughter..
Its Not About Money & Whips Or Honeys With Tit's, you Sit-Strugglin
Quit-Hustlin,Don't Destroy-Ya-health..Take a Deeper Dive Into Lifes Meaning... ENJOY-YA-SELF...

I'm impressed again Hazard.

"We 'See Levels' Of Complexity But Need Ta Take a Deeper-Dive"

I thought this was a creative line.

Overall, I thought you stayed on topic. The message was clear along with the rhymes. Keep it up!

Uppin 4 Feed..

I like this... makes me smile all around (no homo)

no Homoness Taken ..
Thanks 4 Da Feed Homie

Nice rhyme bro.
I like the whole verse. was feelin it man.

keep this up haz..i thought you explained something pretty vivid for the readers of course it had that commercial tip but it was still on point.

Good Lookin Out Fam