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1 Audio Battle.

Kurse (of IllestLyrics.com) Versus War-Fest (of Ill-HipHop.com)

The Rules and Categories are as follows...

Mic Presenece
Delivery
Punches
WordPlay
Swagger
Overall Entertainment
Creativity

No Flippin, No Biased Voting, No Swaying, No crew votes, 2 Minute Minimum Track
Votes only allowed from seasoned Memembers such as...
-Anyone that's been an active member for atleast 4 Months
-Any Admin
-Anyone who has a minimum of 500 Posts
(this should weed out any hate votes and keep it more fair)

**Just incase, a third-party Hip-Hop forum that will not be named at this time has agreed to allow the battle to be posted there as well incase either artist should cry "foul" when it comes to voting.

DUE MONDAY, NOV 17th by MIDNIGHT GMT. (10 PM WestCoast Cali time)

***Every 24Hour time-frame that passes, where someone doesn't drop their battle verse, it'll count as one vote against them as stated in House Rules.

3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO

Check.

..Click clack..

Let's get 'em..

..Wanna put your title on the line..?

Check it. I ain't ever scared. You want a shot at the man...then you got it.

If I lose. Yea. That would definately make you the illestlyrics Heavyweight Audio Champion.

But...

...if you lose. You have to go back to IHH, and create a thread that acknowledges me as their new Audio Champ! AAAAAAND you have to take the Audio-Champ belt out of your sig area and everything.

Loser doesn't cry and bitch. Just accept the loss. And incase you're overly worried about unfair votes, I've already gotten a "thumbs-up" from another 3rd=party rap forum that'll allow their members to vote on the battle. (this ofcourse being the worst case scenario and if you're a sore loser)

Fool you suck ass at choosing catagories..

Here are the cats..
Like it or not..

Mic Presenece-
Delivery-
Punches-
Wordplay-
Nameplay/Name Punches-
Personals-
Swagger-
Creativity-
Overall Entertainment-

You can't change Cats after you checked in on a battle, that's the same as switching the rules in mid-game. You already agreed to them mayne.

We checked in on the 13th. The shit is due on the 17th. You can't come in and switch cats on the 16th because you're not happy with them all of a sudden. Niggaz are gonna think ur tryin to pull sum shit. The cats were fine and fair as they were.

Reason you can't do that is because if someone wrote shit already or recorded shit already and suddenly before the due date, someone comes in and change the Cats...the other battler might have to restart their shit because they possibly might've written their shit based around the categories originally listed already. Sorry, but can't do that man.

But I'll tell you what. Just to show you that I'm not scared, worried or even a bad sport. I'll allow one more of those cats you added. We'll add the "personals" one since nameplay is pretty damn similar to wordplay. But no more tryin to pull slick shit after this. The final voting cats are now as is:

...NO DEBATING THIS, THESE ARE THE CATS...

Mic Presence
Delivery
Punches
WordPlay
Personals
Swagger
Overall Entertainment
Creativity

Here's mine. 8 hours before due time. You have till 9PM California time to drop.

[soundclick]7070105[/soundclick]

Lyrics:

Intro- ...

Verse # 1-

Ladies and Gents, Yes...I must confess..
When it comes to War-Fest, this ain't no contest.
Everybody knows I'm the ILL-est..
there is no detest, to why I'm one of the best.
Nooo.
Don't turn all emotional..
it's evident that I'm better, don't take it personal.
Living out in San Diego.
...but you bring a bad name to all of the West Coast.
Burn a nigga like toast, you got no reason to boast..
truth be told, you should've lost that battle to Ghost.
Dick Ridery had led you to safety..
it's obvious that you lost, but now I seen where your grave be.
Put you in it, I'ma finish the job that Ghost couldn't do by himself..
..I'm a different facade.
A whole new breed, a dissimilar predator..
how you expect to beat me when I'm two steps ahead of ya!?

HOOK-

If ya livin at'cha momma's house...you'z a wannabe!
If ya still gettin grounded...you'z a wannabe!
If you ya talk tough on the internet...you'z a wannabe!
If a pellet gun is a weapon...you'z a wannabe!
If you're still gettin beat-up...you'z a wannabe!
If your only pushin dimes...you'z a wannabe!
If you wanna fuck wit minez, then you gonna see..
..that if your name is War-Fest, you'z a wannabe!

Verse # 2-

Knock-Out Kings, whats tha deal wit War-Fest..
you let him on the squad, but he's far from blessed.
Yep...
..I must protest the contents of ya guess..
and arrest tha overall situation cuz I'm not impressed.
I'm MidWest! I ride till nuthins left..
I suggest you molest the opportunity or take a rest.
Dork-Fest...
..You ain't fuckin wit Kurse..
the closest to carrying heat is the pepper-spray in your purse.
And whats worse, bitches get purse-snatched..
you talk a good game nigga, but ya words don't match.
You ain't hard and you ain't no hoodlum..
you're a fake and you're soft like a silicone buxom.
Who you foolin boy, you know that ya lame..
even Double R and El Original shit on you mayneee!
I'ma eat, and digest this War-Feast..
only time you hear a nigga spit sick is when he sneeze.

HOOK-

If ya livin at'cha momma's house...you'z a wannabe!
If ya still gettin grounded...you'z a wannabe!
If you ya talk tough on the internet...you'z a wannabe!
If a pellet gun is a weapon...you'z a wannabe!
If you're still gettin beat-up...you'z a wannabe!
If your only pushin dimes...you'z a wannabe!
If you wanna fuck wit minez, then you gonna see..
..that if your name is War-Fest, you'z a wannabe!

I slacked off and rushed so bad..
My bad.. Just fucken busy..
I would of recorded during the weekend..
But I was out parting and Friday I had a fever..
Fuck excuses though..
..Here goe's nothin'..

http://www.filebrella.com/download/08ae816e
^^^
MP3 Link..

Ayo I'll get rid of this bitch, split his wig /
Hog tie 'em down to a pair of Nikes that Rell stitched himself //
But real shit, you're just a whack fuck /
No punchlines? So go ahead and keep talkin' your shit //
Your rhymes are more ass than Vida Guerra /
So what gives you the audacity to step to Guerra? //
I'll aim/A.M.E. straight for the CEO, deliver this quik /
With a knockout, like you were Suge Knight bitch //
It's more sad your dickriders realize you're a dike /
But fuck it. I'll end this fag quikker than Prop 8 //
[Prop 8 was against gay marriage.. Was during the president elections..]
(Read the shout box on the screen shot)


You're a fucken no one, how are you champ? /
I made one thread and became more famous than you //
Nobody knows you, you live your life online /
'Cause only time you hear Kurse/curse outside the net
Is if you disrespect your muthafucken daddy.. SON! //
This was me and Rell's beef, and then you jump in? /
Now it's like an astro jump 'cause you gettin' tossed around //
It don't take unwrapping mummys to reveal Kurse /
But I'll wrap 'em up, have 'em dead in a tomb //
It's funny how a dude like you can be a pussy that purrs /
And at the same time, be big and hairy lookin' like chubacca //
Who knows how old you are, but.. /
You gettin' ripped by a fucken 16 year old //
The bigger they are, the harder they fall /
I'll put more clips to your head than a barber //
I'll chop you up in small bits, dump you in the sea /
An ice cold ocean, now you gettin' "dipped in dots" //
[Dip 'N Dots ice cream..]
You may be the center of attention of your site /
But I'll have you "taking more licks" than a tootsie pop //
It's pitifully pathetic how you wanna call me out /
When you make all of your music with the Backstreet Boys //


It's really hard to believe that you have a daughter /
When you're still flirtin' with fat chicks a plane ticket away //


Lyrical genocide, but killin' no Jews /
But you're still shook, quik to babble on/babylon your words //
Right after I stick the blade right in his neck /
I'll be ending Kurse a lot faster than Jack Sparrow //
Word is, you're 28 years old, still fucking with the net? /
Back the fuck up old man, I'll break your hip //
Son, realize you could never end War to peices/peaces /
Even if you wrote up a fucken truce //
On the real? Nobody'll ever see you as a lyricist /
When all you do is say nigga in every bar //
The catagories you always pick have nothing to do with the lyrics /
You're better off doing a karaoke battle //
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/kurse ... 10189.html
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Not my best.. I know..
You can tell I'm somewhat sick by my voice..
But.. Props to you Kurse for doin' your thing..

Mic Presence - Kurse, pretty obvious
Delivery - Kurse, war-fests was real sloppy, flow fell offbeat alot
Punches - Kurse, war-fest had some good attempts but the set-up & execution was all wrong and its alot easier to fit punches in when you're not rhyming
WordPlay - War-Fest, giving this to fest one area where he was superior
Personals - Tie, both had a decent amount
Swagger - Kurse, pretty obvious
Overall Entertainment - Kurse, his track was clearly better to listen to
Creativity - Kurse, the hook sealed the deal on this

overall - Kurse, War-fest was clearly outclassed in this, i'd suggest taking some time to learn how to structure your lyrics better it'll help alot with flow on a track, you got a problem where you don't rhyme and kinda go from bar to bar without a good rhythm, and obviously you need to practice recording more to get a flow and delivery down

Good looks..
I don't use rhyme scheme much in battles..
I choose not to..
I don't need practice IMO..
I just wasn't into it today..

War-Fest wrote:Good looks..
I don't use rhyme scheme much in battles..
I choose not to..
I don't need practice IMO..
I just wasn't into it today..

Mic Presence - Kurse, war fest lacks presence
Delivery - Kurse, he was in sync the whole time
Punches - Kurse, he had better setups
WordPlay - War Fest got more creative, burnt like toast?
Personals - Kurse, if I was Kurse I wouldn't have been disheartened by any of them disses
Swagger - Kurse
Overall Entertainment - Kurse, from the hook to the last line, despite some really weak lyrical bars
Creativity - Kurse had the far superior output

overall - Kurse was far from flawless, but seriously when you're getting out rhymed by Kurse on the multi side, you don't really stand a chance because he is going to rip you in every other category, besides maybe punches where you fell short, I didn't think your verse was embarrassing but when compared to kurse's it wasn't that good, don't bother say I dickride either because I've voted against Kurse many times

.. Damn How U a Rapper, But Don`t Rhyme?

R u said it best nigga haha

..( R.SON.aLL ).. wrote:.. Damn How U a Rapper, But Don`t Rhyme?

Like I said..
I choose not to rhyme in my BATTLES..
I also choose not to use multis in battles..
I have a completely different style in battles..

http://www.filebrella.com/download/070105d1

http://www.filebrella.com/download/e173d5e4

In my regular music tracks..
I don't stretch my bars..
I use multis.. Etc..
But in the first link I didn't use any multis..

But yeah.. Thanks or whatever..
On the feed.. Lol..
At least you weren't talkin shit like usual..
I'm taking a break with battling after this anyway..
I tend to enjoy battling when I crave it..
..Not when I'm called out..
Just the way I am..
And don't say Kurse shook me into quittin'..
I been wanting to take a break from battles..