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4 real dis txy lets get dis goin
ill show dese kidz im legit
ihh goin get dissed by a new kid lol

yo ihh goin step 2 illest wen u don't understand
dat if our 9s dont kill u den our uzis can
aks under our beds like da boogie man
leave u six feet under like da sandman

ima put an x on dere mass (xmas)and it aint marry
in da mirror your scared to say my name like its marys
leave you bloody when i appear pain will vairy
and leave dis world "with out you" like mariah carey

come on in here and get bombed like osoma
ill hit you wit scary shit and leave trama
your so poor your hangin on yo moma
so ur b beggin for "change" like ya oboma

listen up fame i kno about mob and its aight
but don't come around here lookin for a fight
bcuz our sick skillz will leave you ina fright
but tell me how can LIL BLAYZE go 9-0 on ur site?!!!????

just a lil freestyle off da dome
ill explain any of these lines if you need it

Hey This Not A Bad Drop, The Punches Were There. Could Be Improved But its All Good. The Flow i Caught Through Out Which Was good To! Did u Write to A Beat? If So What Beat. But Anyways, Keep On Dropping!

no no beat just sat here and typed if ida had a beat ida had da flo better

Not bad.

"listen up fame i kno about mob and its aight
but don't come around here lookin for a fight
bcuz our sick skillz will leave you ina fright
but tell me how can LIL BLAYZE go 9-0 on ur site?!!!????"

My fav part of you drop!

It wasnt anything fancy. But you got the msg across IMHO. Keep them coming man.

Not Too Bad. I Didn't Get Some Parts But I Think It Was More Because Of Your Typing That I Didn't Understand It. lol. I Think Your Punches Could Of Been Set Up An Executed A Little Better But There's always Room To Improve, Over all It Wasn't Horrible, Just Keep Droppin.

Try Writing More To Beats, It's Easier To Keep A Structure Going So Your Bars Add Up And Aren't All Over the Place.

B E Z

thanks for da feed

i dont find writing to a beat changes anything really

anyway, drops aright, i agree theres room to improve but ur at a good starting point, keep droppin uve got potential

Yeah Well precise Your Canadian. lol j/p