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Momma Always Said...

Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 2:55 pm
by Borat
Momma Always said,"Life is like light and dark"
the good times, the bad times, and aftershock's
you can change the world, just find your direction,
rewind existance, imply perfection.

Eye the sky, as it follow's. watch it finally breath.
shift the sands with the mountians and sea's
you can do it baby boy, you just gotta believe...

As I lay back on the grass and look at the trees,
I reflect on the good times and conversations we seen
thank you momma for being the one to help me.




Thought I would drop a little free post poem, tell me what you all think.

Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:29 pm
by precise
not bad dude, not my favorite but its a good quick read

Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:29 pm
by precise
by the way, nice stevie wonder glasses in the display pic man hahaha

Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 8:03 am
by Borat
LOL haha yea man haha.

Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:21 pm
by Glamtrash
Not bad. Didn't really "grab" me in anyway but I'm assuming you just threw it together for the fuck of it. Keep droppin'. You've got potential.