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Flow/Structure
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Name Play / Word Play
Entertainment / Enjoyment

check, this is due tomorrow right?

Yezzir.

So There Is No Confusion It's Due Today... LoL Meaning You Can Have It Any time Before Sunday...

k lol figured i mine as well drop now, hate wastin time


im the cause of death like the invention-of-weapons, causin ya jaws to spread to split ya text-into-sections,
lyrically i'll end this session-in-seconds, leave u "GASSED" out, to reflect ur record back to "7-11",

i'll stop reactions like i've broken-the-chain, SHIT's stolen-ya-name, got u wipin yaself clean like u soapin-a-stain,
u've been new-since(nuisance) the moment-ya-came, u couldn't PICTURE ya POOR~TRAIT(PORTRAIT) if u were holdin-ya-FRAME,

ya mind's-hesitatin but there's no time-left-for-pacin, u couldn't raise a bar if u had ur rhymes-elevatin,
a COUPLE to DUMP behind-SEPERATIONS, duce form-early(formerly) "shit himself" cuz he "defines-defecation",

just like ya name.. watch u vanish-in-"PEACE", the word "DEUCE" means 2 so how u manage-a-3???,
i swear i must've damaged-ya-keys the way it seems ya like biggest disadvantage-is-"E", (no E in ur name)

n i ain't savin-HEARTS, i'm "droppin a deuce" to win like this was a game-of-CARDS,
u must be trained-to-fart, cuz the only time u RIPPIN SHIT is if u took ur NAME-APART



Duc3=deuce: means 2, or takin a shit, also used to say bye(or peace)

The Fans All Witnessed The

Miraculous Beating That Left His Arm Stiff Thrown In Thorn Pits..He's Surely Torn Swift
My Writtens Resemble Technological Blue Prints.. How They'll Tarnish Any Scriptures By Om Ish(Am Ish)
Sorry I'll Have To Drag You To Hell Through This Disturbin Course Wow..
This TRULY Represents A Black Male in A Kidnapping Situation..How Majority Of His Words Are Forced Out!,
His Bars? There Sloppy With Slight Consistence..
He Couldn't Fight The Distance,Especially With Those Nursery Rhymes..Somethings Likely Missin'
I Think Mother Goose Should Sue For Copy Right/Write Infringement!
Totin The Heaters That Will Turn Them Into Broken Up Features!!..
Not Only Anime Fans Can Say (Ek In)(s) A Fake Snake..As If I Were Refferin To Pokemon Creatures!
You Seem In Disguised An Sketched!!! Watch Me Supply The Death..
This Site Is All For Elasticity In Underwear..Seein As They Don't Kare If Lines Are Stretched




Ish As In Shit..ekOMs..And Amish As In Old Societies..
Black males..kid nap situation.. the nappers put guns to the kids to plea..and "FORCE" there words out so they get what they wont
He has hella multis but his lines are steal Basic..Ya KNow?
Ekkins(is a snake pokemon on the show.."Pokemon" Etc..etc..His lines are stretched as FUCK..usually underwear.. advertise elasticity..

Upping.

Punch Lines-ekoms
Flow/Structure-ekoms hands down
Multis-ekoms
Name Play / Word Play-ekoms
Entertainment / Enjoyment-ekoms

i had a hard time reading yours duc3

u Gotta Meet Requirements 2 Vote TXY

can we get some votes in this? some legit ones so it actually counts

Punch Lines - E
Flow/Structure - E easy!
Multis - cLOSE
Name Play / Word Play - E
Entertainment / Enjoyment - E




OVERALL EKOM.....1 SIDED IN MAH OPPINION!!

Punch Lines - Ekoms
Flow/Structure - Ekoms
Multis - Duce
Name Play / Word Play - Ekoms (Duce was way too forced)
Entertainment / Enjoyment - Ekoms

Duce you was just forcin' too many concept's & that brought down from ya verse.

2-0

uppin

LoL I Need To Stop Slacking..

In All Honest It Should Of Been A Cat Sweep In Ekoms Favor
lOL I came With A Shitty Verse & It was strecthed

LoL
Vote = Ekoms

well that saved some wasted time i guess lol

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