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i wasnt gonna beat you, but fuck it!!
complexity fistin' ya ASSS... how we not gonna call you his puppet..
you suck kid...its just what im observin' of ya
you just a shrunken down, retarded, oriental version of him'
i see the feed you just left me, and i appreciate that
but when i release the hate facts, i can't eleviate that..
we cool and all dawg, but ill have to fuck ya tho..
call complexity's dick "his career".. cause after our battle. it was "up in smoke" (MURDERRRRR)

i'll let that rest... thats murder.. ill relax my fingers..

1,2,3,4.. lets go..

you talking all big.. but ya punches are small
and if you connected... they wouldnt feel like punches at all..
you a faggit'.. you say you buck, but hardly...
one look at this guy and you know "E' comes fucked".. like arriving drunk at parties
my freestyles make g's smiles and get weedpiles defiled..
so decline cause my key's wild, and make wee childs bleed wine..
see i can rhyme too... but i can punch like a bastard
you like an old broken wall.. you stay gettin plastered.
and we dont fuck with snitches.. and you All that..
one look at ya photo.. look like a fuckin' new born rat..
those shades make you look will smith
but even he got some cred as a rapper.. and you still aint been ill, yet..
you dead already.. so ill end with something tragic..
ya tombstone'll read like houdini's "died trying to fuck with magic"


we cool... im bored lol..

LMAO @ one look at ya photo.. look like a fuckin' new born rat..


complexity fistin' ya ASSS... how we not gonna call you his puppet..


FUNNY SHit LMAO..
Deff Murdaed Him On Some Funny Shit...
He'll Reply lol So Be Ready To Spit Back At Dood...

hm i dunno i expected better even tho its a freestyle, intro was straight, the rest just seemed too forced

see i can rhyme too... but i can punch like a bastard
you like an old broken wall.. you stay gettin plastered.
and we dont fuck with snitches.. and you All that..
one look at ya photo.. look like a fuckin' new born rat..
^^^^
this section stood out to me. some nice punches. the rest of the verse was ok nothin special but it was good for a freestyle

lmao i liked that close, thought it was sick, overall the piece was ok, like yer other one had some nice punches here n there, rhymes were a tad to forced in some spots but shit happenns

this was ok, i mean, u made a lot better ones thats why to ur caliber, my expectations are a little bit higher, idk the flow was off in a lot of places and the punches werent as hard hitting as the kurse diss lol


good job though, i like how ur attacking everyone, but its gonna be hard trying to keep that explosiveness consistent so just look into that more and youll get much more props.

other than that the piece was ok. 6/10

Lol Pretty Funny Nice Drop

Not Bad

man this was pretty good
the multies can pretty well
the punches weren't bad dawg

we cool and all dawg, but ill have to fuck ya tho..
call complexity's dick "his career".. cause after our battle. it was "up in smoke" (MURDERRRRR)

that was dope shit right there^

keep'em comin

I liked the punches in this one it was funny as hell.