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Best 3 out of 5
Deadline 48 Hour's of Opponants Checkin since we are both kinda busy
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G'd Luck & I Do Look forward to this

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check ..my bad for the delay i havent been home

my bad i forgot about this for a sec...

*Expos*

* properties=traits
** musket=gun=artillery
*** fundamental=basics=an essential part
**** EAR is to SEE, as sincere is to lie(ear/see,sincear/fake)
***** Print Screen/System Requirement=key on the keyboard(Print Screen SysRq)
****** Ireland+luck="luck of the Irish"



keep an 'open' EAR when i start-to-drop-the-beat, possibly cuz it's too hard-to-stop-the-keys,
my bars-too-hot-for-heat,these lyrics pen-a-TRAIT('penetrate') the way i 'carve-thru'-PROPERTIES*

sincear no match for me, man ya puns-r-gental, u mus'get(musket) insurance for ur artillery cuz ur gun's-a-rental**
i come-ESSENTIAL, lyrically written from-a-pen's-soul(pencil),i'll spare some BASIC thoughts just so i can FUND-A-MENTAL(fundamental)***

i gotta demon's-trait(demonstrate) to scream-n-hate till ya heart beat's-been-raised to increase-the-rate,
u got no appearance cuz u got a decievin-face, no one believe-this-snake! u claim ur "sincEAR"? well all i SEE-is-"fake",****

u got ya knees~in~place to get that semen~taste like this was a prison-environment,
this fiend~is~late...yo..PRINT SCREEN~n~paste,cuz that's ur SYSTEM's-REQUIREMENT,*****

don't be dishin-ya-tired-plan cuz i know ur not sincear..i won't listen-to-liars-man,
i got the FISTS-in-a-hired-HAND, so ur "shit out of LUCK" like the distance-from-IRELAND******

my bad..just got off work & I dont even feel that good but i'll finish like a Champ lol

I'll take your MORTAL-SOUL"!!,& put it though a "PORTAL-HOLE"!! Then *HACK* u into pieces just to break ya MORAL-CODE"!!,(Whew!!..Think about it)
Whose Hot? Bitch my Flow is Cold like the "WINTER-RAIN"!!,I Got a Winners Brain Watch the Punches Leave an Echo through the Middle of ya Frame like the "CENTER-of-ya-NAME"!!,(eko)
Ayo My Flow's Can "CHANGE-MODE"!!,Create Woe You Can't Though Infact this Faggot's "WAY-OLD"!!,wit a Style thats out of Date & I Aint Tellin his Identity when I Give *E* the "K.O."!!,
I've Birthed the "DEATH-of-VIRGINS"!!,then Left the "MESS-UNCERTAIN"!!,for what its Worth I Hope it Hurts Cuz I Can *CUT* Through You like "FLESH-to-SURGEONS"!!,
Bar for Bar theres No Equal ta Me I'ma Rip up "YA-RIBS-n-SPLEEN"!!,but Even in ya Dreams "YA-BITCH-CALLED-ME"!!,No Appologys Cuz the Only One Feelin *MOS* is "TALIB-KWELI"!!,

lol wat's with u and ur buddy scott reffering me to "mos" obviously realizing that it isn't spelt that way haha, n e ways nice drop i like that k.o. nameplay

get the votes in ppl

prnounciation doesnt mean much if were not spelling the full name..i see a concept & I run with it..ya feel me?

lol sure,

still uppin

keep an 'open' EAR when i start-to-drop-the-beat, possibly cuz it's too hard-to-stop-the-keys,
my bars-too-hot-for-heat,these lyrics pen-a-TRAIT('penetrate') the way i 'carve-thru'-PROPERTIES*

WAS AIIIGHT, SOME NICE CLEVER WORDPLAY...NOT TOO HARD HITTING THOUGH..

sincear no match for me, man ya puns-r-gental, u mus'get(musket) insurance for ur artillery cuz ur gun's-a-rental**
i come-ESSENTIAL, lyrically written from-a-pen's-soul(pencil),i'll spare some BASIC thoughts just so i can FUND-A-MENTAL(fundamental)***

AGAIN, NICE WORDPLAY BUT THERE IS NO REAL DIRECT PUNCH TOWARDS SINCEAR..

i gotta demon's-trait(demonstrate) to scream-n-hate till ya heart beat's-been-raised to increase-the-rate,
u got no appearance cuz u got a decievin-face, no one believe-this-snake! u claim ur "sincEAR"? well all i SEE-is-"fake",****

I WOULDNT HAVE GOTTEN THIS IF I DIDNT READ YA EXPOS..N STILL IT WAS KINDA WEAK IMO... NICE MULTIS THOUGH

u got ya knees~in~place to get that semen~taste like this was a prison-environment,
this fiend~is~late...yo..PRINT SCREEN~n~paste,cuz that's ur SYSTEM's-REQUIREMENT,*****

I DONT LIKE KEYBOARD PUNCHLINES..NO OFFENSE...

don't be dishin-ya-tired-plan cuz i know ur not sincear..i won't listen-to-liars-man,
i got the FISTS-in-a-hired-HAND, so ur "shit out of LUCK" like the distance-from-IRELAND******

THIS WAS IIGHT... I WANTED TO SEE MORE NAMEPLAY N HARDER PUNCHES IN YA VERSE..










I'll take your MORTAL-SOUL"!!,& put it though a "PORTAL-HOLE"!! Then *HACK* u into pieces just to break ya MORAL-CODE"!!,(Whew!!..Think about it)

NOT BAD NOT BAD...

Whose Hot? Bitch my Flow is Cold like the "WINTER-RAIN"!!,I Got a Winners Brain Watch the Punches Leave an Echo through the Middle of ya Frame like the "CENTER-of-ya-NAME"!!,(eko)

SICK....MULTIS SUCKED THOUGH...

Ayo My Flow's Can "CHANGE-MODE"!!,Create Woe You Can't Though Infact this Faggot's "WAY-OLD"!!,wit a Style thats out of Date & I Aint Tellin his Identity when I Give *E* the "K.O."!!,

SIMPLE NAMEPLAY, BUT STILL A SOLID BAR...

I've Birthed the "DEATH-of-VIRGINS"!!,then Left the "MESS-UNCERTAIN"!!,for what its Worth I Hope it Hurts Cuz I Can *CUT* Through You like "FLESH-to-SURGEONS"!!,

EHH...WAS OK...

Bar for Bar theres No Equal ta Me I'ma Rip up "YA-RIBS-n-SPLEEN"!!,but Even in ya Dreams "YA-BITCH-CALLED-ME"!!,No Appologys Cuz the Only One Feelin *MOS* is "TALIB-KWELI"!!,

DECENT, I WROTE A NAMEPLAY SORTA LIKE THIS, BUT HIS NAME ISNT SPELLED WITH "MOS" ITS "OMS"


so overall i think im gonna have to give this vote to ekoms cuz of his clever wordplay, though his punches were lackin that hard hitting shit...
sincear, u came weak as fuck bro..WTF?? ive seen u come 100x better than this fam...
no hate

vote: EKOMS barely....

none taken every dog has there day Im just gettin sick as fuck yo cold season..my mind aint right lol i be tryin to type while i'm sneezin & snifflin & shit

EkomS wrote:my bad i forgot about this for a sec...

*Expos*

* properties=traits
** musket=gun=artillery
*** fundamental=basics=an essential part
**** EAR is to SEE, as sincere is to lie(ear/see,sincear/fake)
***** Print Screen/System Requirement=key on the keyboard(Print Screen SysRq)
****** Ireland+luck="luck of the Irish"



keep an 'open' EAR when i start-to-drop-the-beat, possibly cuz it's too hard-to-stop-the-keys,
my bars-too-hot-for-heat,these lyrics pen-a-TRAIT('penetrate') the way i 'carve-thru'-PROPERTIES*

Don't use multis so much..they inable you to set up the punch / word it good..i nsome cases they can work but not here!

sincear no match for me, man ya puns-r-gental, u mus'get(musket) insurance for ur artillery cuz ur gun's-a-rental**
i come-ESSENTIAL, lyrically written from-a-pen's-soul(pencil),i'll spare some BASIC thoughts just so i can FUND-A-MENTAL(fundamental)***

.... i won't even rate this..for the fact you didn't even diss him? ..besides the mus'get... straight line..not all that poppin..."alright line"

i gotta demon's-trait(demonstrate) to scream-n-hate till ya heart beat's-been-raised to increase-the-rate,
u got no appearance cuz u got a decievin-face, no one believe-this-snake! u claim ur "sincEAR"? well all i SEE-is-"fake",****

...Demonstrait? = played..i've seen battles with the former member here (meta the demoN) so yeah thats played to me..you kinda ran train on the multis....they kinda get annoying..


u got ya knees~in~place to get that semen~taste like this was a prison-environment,
this fiend~is~late...yo..PRINT SCREEN~n~paste,cuz that's ur SYSTEM's-REQUIREMENT,*****

LoL..decent best bar to me

don't be dishin-ya-tired-plan cuz i know ur not sincear..i won't listen-to-liars-man,
i got the FISTS-in-a-hired-HAND, so ur "shit out of LUCK" like the distance-from-IRELAND******

????...LoL okay..???

I'll take your MORTAL-SOUL"!!,& put it though a "PORTAL-HOLE"!! Then *HACK* u into pieces just to break ya MORAL-CODE!!

LoL Nice bar..but atleast try dissing him...flowed smoothly.,,


Whose Hot? Bitch my Flow is Cold like the "WINTER-RAIN"!!,I Got a Winners Brain Watch the Punches Leave an Echo through the Middle of ya Frame like the "CENTER-of-ya-NAME"!!,(eko)

lame Basic...come ON!..weak punch concept

Ayo My Flow's Can "CHANGE-MODE"!!,Create Woe You Can't Though Infact this Faggot's "WAY-OLD"!!,wit a Style thats out of Date & I Aint Tellin his Identity when I Give *E* the "K.O."!!,

Don't brag about how good you are.. but brag about how crappy he is..Nuff siad..other then that.. mediocre bar besides the teeny multi usage...

I've Birthed the "DEATH-of-VIRGINS"!!,then Left the "MESS-UNCERTAIN"!!,for what its Worth I Hope it Hurts Cuz I Can *CUT* Through You like "FLESH-to-SURGEONS"!!,

Basic...Lame

Bar for Bar theres No Equal ta Me I'ma Rip up "YA-RIBS-n-SPLEEN"!!,but Even in ya Dreams "YA-BITCH-CALLED-ME"!!,No Appologys Cuz the Only One Feelin *MOS* is "TALIB-KWELI"!!,

LoL Best Bar...


Vote / Sin...Both of you need to use more punches and less multis..I Wanna see better punches man..

1-1 appreciate the votes, ppl need to quit slackin

Punchlines : Sin
Nameplay : Sin
Wordplay : Both.
Multis : Both
Flow - Sin.
Consistency Sin
Overrall Vote: Sin.

To Be Honest This battle Was more On The weak Side,
Sin had Better Nameplay N Punchlines..
Both Had Wordplay , Both HAd Multis I Liked Sin's Betta..
He Jus Flowed Betta Period... Kept it Consistent....
Ekom's Came With Some Straight Wordplay Jus felt There Wus Element's Missin In his Verse... Anyways Keep Da Up Da Battles Yall.

Vote - Sin.

technically I Shouldnt count scott's vote because you have to have 50 posts to vote as stated in the rules..but I Consider my self to be a fair indivdual..

so it is now 2-1 in my favour..

up

i'll use haz's cats as a guideline..

jesus.. this battle was ass... didnt see a decent punch in the whole battle... seriously... nothing kept me interested...


Punchlines : tie - none really from either.. sin tried i suppose..
Nameplay : i'll give this to sin.. as i wernt feelin' ekom's plays
Wordplay : sin takes this too, his wordplay was okay and atleast aimed at ekoms, ekoms felt like he was half assin' a cypher
Multis : give this to ekoms.. slighlty more crisp
Flow - tie - both soli enough
Consistency - neither
Overrall Vote: Sin..

Jeez.. dunno what to say.. none of ya'll really deserve the vote to be brutally honest..

sin came okay.. but had wordplay which didnt hit, concepts that didnt work.. worded badly.. no damage to opponent really.. at least he was trying and had some okay shit...

ekoms's verse was indirect, and when it wasnt indirect it wasnt hard hitting.. that 2nd bar is nothing short of a circus.. its clever in a cypher.. but in a BATTLE?... it has NO PLACE... could be used against anyone and isnt any type of shot at an oppoenent..

expected better from both

vote - sin