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There's truth to this
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 3:59 am
by Ambiguous Realm
im just rhymin-to-rhyme-again rewinding-the-time-to-spin, visionin-the-past, where i was still wishin-it-would-last, now the future we hold is us listenin-to-trash, whether or not these rhymes-r-sensible, in a true battle my minds-invincible, i'm-convinced-to-show but not persuaded-enough ..been rated-above n now i'm too hated-to-love,u couldn't comprehend me if i elaborated-a-bunch, complex creativity made-with-a-punch, A-VOID-IN CONTACT like ya'll too FAKE n im too famous-to-TOUCH, was never askin-for-much, simply just respect but now my passion-is-done, i put out MAGAZINES of WEAPONS just so i can FASHION-a-GUN, think i'm weak cuz my lyrics r effortless? shit i'm just havin-some-fun
yea another freestyle lol
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 4:02 am
by Arvincible
for a fuckin "oh shit imma write a two minute verse" this was hot...
diction was higher and creativity is yet again impressive...go read a book or play a sport or something man, lol u just scribblin a lot now haha jk man great job.
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 4:17 am
by Kurse
Now that was dope haha
That was classic Ekoms there.
That "i put out MAGAZINES of WEAPONS just so i can FASHION-a-GUN" was just sick!!!
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 2:56 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
haha, thanks for the feed guys
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 11:51 pm
by Haz
This Was Coo..
Multi's Wus There..
Nothin Really Caught My Eye...
Deff Flowed Well...
Mag Line Wus Straight..
KEep Droppin
Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 8:59 am
by precise
lol not bad at all dude, a classic ekoms key-up really
couple decent punches n sick multies
Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 8:31 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
This Shit Was Koo ..
Nothin Real Special Bout it ..
Coulda Been Better to Be Real ..
Flow Was On Point Tho ..
Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2008 8:45 pm
by Jesodist
Nice shit big homie.
Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2008 10:47 pm
by TreTru
sounded on point.I got the rythm. good transfers.
heavy on the multis..
Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 7:18 am
by - Mutual -
yeah was dope with Multies
pretty straight fire verse here
the punch Kurse said was dope man
keep'em comin
Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 2:14 pm
by Jesodist
Thats real truth right here i read it again and i really felt that shit.
Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 11:24 pm
by Glamtrash
Well, for something that was written in the span of two minutes, it's not bad at all kid. The line that Kurse quoted was my favourite overall as well. Good shit.
Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 11:29 am
by TreTru
Ekoms hit me up when you get back next year...
Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 6:12 pm
by Jesodist
Nothing like the truth.
Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 9:38 pm
by TheCh3mist
yeah not bad for a quick lil spit homie, flow was good n shit, no hard punches really or anything but fuck it, its all hip hop baby! ahah