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Just 6 bars

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 9:54 am
by Mass Effex
Feed Please

I come-equip, with people that be runnin-shit
and like to loot up spots, just for the fun-of-it
and they just wish that you come down-dog's-way
waitin on your appearance like groundhog day
Sex, money, and murder, shit you've always heard-of
as far as lyrics, I'm the picture painter master worder
I know New Orleans, where people are feelin-fema
in the city that got messed up like Hiroshima
Masta-mass, grabs mics and lyrically blast-yo-ass
I spit truth when most people lack the facts
I respect kayne cause he can sing and rap
but mainstream is weak and he needs to bring it back

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 10:28 am
by precise
i liked it man u had some good bars n none of the rhymes were forced

good shit dude

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 11:16 am
by MicJordan
When I spit 6 bars, i never fall off like cigars
there aint another motherfucker this hard,
strong enough to crack pavement and split tar
I have no strings attached sex like guitars



bleh i cant keep goin

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 11:25 am
by precise
lol^^^ this aint the cypher section dude

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 11:49 am
by Glamtrash
It's pretty good. I'd up your vocab but aside from that, it wasn't bad. Good shit kid.

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 12:24 pm
by MicJordan
nm im retarded, thought it was for us to post 6bars, not him saying his shit was just 6bars.

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 1:38 pm
by precise
MicJordan wrote:nm im retarded, thought it was for us to post 6bars, not him saying his shit was just 6bars.
no worries dude, but if u feel the need, the cypher section is open for bussiness