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Here's some bs i wrote last year

Lyrical genious that all the unrealness deals with
I keep my attitude at fearless
Face to Face, people ain't got nothing to say
but it's funny how they mumble when I'm walkin away
how they send me messages all over their CD
they can say whatever they want, It's easy-
-to talk, but sayin' what you belive is hard
especially when that belif is pleasin' God
but sometimes, I can't always do the right thing
I do dirt, for all the cash it might bring
moneytrees, if you plant the seed will grow
grab my mic, and that's all I need to flow
aim high, so you can fly and never look back
but realistically, never does anything good last
that's what I think, it's not what they say
I learn from experience, the only way
and to say what I preach without bein a pasta
but the only difference is I get the word out fasta
but still say fuck the world and everything in it
cause I can show the ending to every begining

nice rhymes in some spots, it was nice in the openin, sorta lost interest by the end, but overall not to shabby man good job

I like it man. Not bad at all.

"Lyrical genious that all the unrealness deals with
I keep my attitude at fearless
Face to Face, people ain't got nothing to say
but it's funny how they mumble when I'm walkin away"

was nice and it got my attention to finish reading the rest.
You started off better than you finished thou IMHO


Key some new stuff up man

yeah this had sum good flow points but was off and on the multies got in there i was quite feelin this piece keep bringin em fam ya got a talent