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I

Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 4:48 am
by SkRoLLz
I.....?
What is I?
Who AM I?
i Am here.... but who nows Why?
Im Alive, But I Live for No reason... I Live To die?
So Why Try? why Should I Survive?
Who Put us Here? questions Run Through My Mind,
No one answers, So I Turn to Rhymes,
But what Do these Lyrics prove?
Nothing!
I see straight through these Lines,
SO Why do we take our Time?
typing words Online?
Do we enjoy being Criticized,
Or is This just The weird ways Of I...
I... I.....I
With Out I, With That Leave the World Blind?
Do i Mean i or Eye,Or Am I Talking Bout Mine,
But Its Two eyes does that Mean I is Plural,
Nah I is Only I, See Through My Self Mural,
I... eye Dont Cry, I with No Tears?
But im Only Human, Its No I without Fears,

I, Who Am I? Am I MAde By My Clothes,
Does my appearance Define I,
I Think To myself And Self loathe,
Im Walking A lonely Road,
I See My I, over my Nose,
But now Theres My,
But Why? How Can i Own,
I wont Live Forever,
so earth isnt my Home,
Use Your iPhone ,
See If you can dial My Tone,
Do i Roam, Or is i Just Alone,
if i Am A clone,
Theres two I's?
Or Am I Out my Zone,
Maybe my minds Gone,
Off the Planet I've Flown,
Uncharted And Unknown,
Nahh.. Couldnt be,
My Zone is Owned By Me,
But i just went through That,
Do I Really Control Anything,
False Reality, is This All A Dream,
the word of Martian Luther,
Am I my own King?
But This Is not my Air, I should Not Breath
Or Maybe I, is What I cant Belive,
Maybe I, is tricking Me,
he's Jealous of what i got,
Eye Can see, But Wants Be,
But What About A,
hey, My Minds D-N-A,
But between Thats Theres B,
But My Eyes C,
So A-N-D,
That would Mean both,
So Can My brain See,
And If It Has Vision, Why does it need Sleep,
Man Im thinking I's A Creep,
he wants to Be Me, But My thinks hes Weak,
O No Not Again, Am I Just Thinking To Deep,
Cuz Now My, wants Whats His,
But I in he First place was questioning why do I,Live
I Is Looking At A knife,
Thinking of Taking My's,Life,
But My want To Live, I wont Leave without a Fight,
But My's brain doesn't know what i Knows,
So I, Cut My Throat, now They Consider Me Psycho,
But if I Equals Me, Then Why Am I, hurting?
I Am my self, But isn't Their A Third Person,
I Am getting Sick with Myself,
I Think of Me, And I Worsen,
But I Starts To Think to Myself, of Murder,
So I Kills Myself, With Me, My Dies,
And Me Myself And I, Die together As we Merger,

Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 4:55 am
by SkRoLLz
dope lol

Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 9:24 am
by SkRoLLz
omfg stop fucking sleeping u homos!!!

Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 10:27 am
by TRU
vocab basic as fuck. basically your a faggot


LOL

Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 10:57 am
by precise
true tru

lol @ "martian luther", i thought he was from earth bro, was that a typo or on purpose?

i wasnt to enthrawled by it, interestin idea tho, keep writin

n btw, no one cruises the distilled concepts section, hard to get feedback in here

Posted: Tue Oct 21, 2008 11:39 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
i thought it had some potential.. fell off towards the ending a bit, alot of it was confusing.. and it seemed like u jumped off topic for a bit, this kinda seems like somethin that i would probably think up in my mind during a fever...so considering i had a fever for the past 3 days it kinda suited me for the moment haha, keep droppin