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Wrote this awhile back when i Got bored..

I Dont Really Write Potery that often.


Given Proof of Time by His Withered Reflection He Sillhouettes His Portrait,
Calm & Creative are the ideal's For Which He Paints His Story,
Consumed By a Time More Fragile He is Serene,
Poised in a Stature Remnant of David Himself..He Ponders Reminiscentley,
Suggested By his Many of Problems Pain is Nothing New,
Tis As Familiar as the Warmth of the Morning Sun,
Above Day Break a Day is Broken with Woe,
Vows Are Weeping Sorrows,
The Mind Races As if 1st Place is Possible in its Current Context,
Amused by Such Idea's He Finds Himself afar in a Place Never Known,
The Journey Back is Nothing Short of Practical Application,
These Waters Are New & Mysterious,
His Eyes They Trace the Current Hungerly,
The View Before Him is Ever Expanding,
Increasing in Size & Depth...The Journey that Would Befall Him-
- Was As Important as it would be Considered Impossible,

Given Proof of Time by His Withered Reflection He Sillhouettes His Portrait,
Calm & Creative are the ideal's For Which He Paints His Story,
Consumed By a Time More Fragile He is Serene,
Poised in a Stature Remnant of David Himself..He Ponders Reminiscentley


wow that shit was actually pretty cool

In my Own Opinion this Poem was Complex as Hell.
Loved all The Vocab Used... Thought you Used The Element's of Writing nicely.
Good Way 2 Express yourself Mos Def..


Given Proof of Time by His Withered Reflection He Sillhouettes His Portrait,
Calm & Creative are the ideal's For Which He Paints His Story,
Consumed By a Time More Fragile He is Serene,
Poised in a Stature Remnant of David Himself..He Ponders Reminiscentley,


^ Loved that part Of your Poem

Keep it up Man.

preciate the feed yall