Hip Hop Forum

Check these beats out, The first two were just to try something new.
I just started doing this and I use demo software, so they're not all that they could be.
please give me some honest feeback

www.myspace.com/masseffekt92



www.youtube.com/john129flip (a couple different beats)

be easy - had a folk music type feel to it, liked the drum & bassline sounds, not bad but too repetative

all the time - cool jazz type shit, bass sounds really bad, drums are cool, but like the first way too repetative

american victory - string line is cool, saw synth that kicks in doesn't sound good the melody line is right the sound just doesn't sit well, i'm guessing maybe you were meaning the saw to be the bassline? changing it to a more traditional sounding bass would sound alot better, like the drum sounds, same prob. as the first two with repetativeness though

Yo it aint all that bad man but u gota get the audience in mind when the crunch bites like im learnin myself other than that just keep workin ya studio and stay up

Decent beats. Sounds like some of the samples that you'd get in a version of Magix Music Maker. The samples again, are decent...but the beats themselves could use a little bit of work.

Like for example. The beat is repetative and looped the same all the way through, from start to finish. There's no switch-ups or additions to seperate the 16 bar verses from the points in which the hook/chorus is supposed to come in. That's very important...gotta get those in there.

Other than that and a few other minor things [that I'm sure you'll discover the more you produce]...you seem to be in good shape.
Keep workin wit shit and perfecting your craft bruh.

Thanks guys for the feed.
haha, yeah that American victory saw and drums were sampled, and the strings were sample sounds but my own melody. That was before I got FL.