Hip Hop Forum

5 bars
no hate
Cats are
flw
punches
personals
wordplay/name play
Creativity

bar due in a week? dat kool

Lol at a week deadline.
come on make it a bit shorter.


anyway check

thats cool


good luck

Quick Drop..Didn't Have Much Time..And Didn't Want To Ho Show

C Eroded Before He Plots He'll End Up With Distorted Knots,Forced An Dropped
Like Distributin Bay Area Rappers Several Drinks At Da Bar il Giv E-40 Shots
Man Dude Ya Lame..He Gets Smashed In Tha Flo C's Whack And We Know!!!
I'll Call Nerds To Randomly Punch In (Punchin)C-4 Like I Was Crackin A Code
I Hate To Stutter Fool So Let Me Makin Clear I'm Bringin Tha Trouble Thru,
That Ain't Ya Favorite Group In Ya Av..Befo Tha A Ya Missin Tha Double U(NWBA)
You Probably Copy Ma Swag, Stop N Gasp!! Let My Lyrics Just Topple This Fag
Similar To Blind Kids In An Eye Check Up I'll Leave C In An Impossible Tas
Ya Limped,Lame An Gonna Know, Ya Mention Names Its Gonna Show
They'll See Me Slammin Down Bones, Like An Intense Game Of Dominoes

C/in/seein
e as in the e's in his name..plus tha rapper..etc..

You aint trouble ya weak, I`d rather slit my throat than show that I get on with ya!
Duce got a couple defeats, then 'ran from Illest' like Usain Bolt with hypochondria!!*
What happens to 'baby duce?'- die per (diaper) usual, make u shit ya Pampers when I rhyme
Structure problem, dampness in his lines, C 'serve an ace on deuce' like Sampras in his prime!*
Ya battalions dick takers, no medallions just fakers, I`ll give an 'L to Duce' like Italian dictators!*
Ya reps shrink sizing, on the brink diving, u only see 'D.U and I' when im fuckin drink driving!
Ya limbs weak, aint 'pumpin iron' like gym geeks!, couldnt get lucky if u paste on a clover bro
A case? caught a homo cold, he aint a G! 'Duce lies bout the street' like a wastewater overflow!
Laid in a hearse, RIP`s 'a-damned family' (Addams family), when I put the stake in u 'Lurch'
With the blade I do search, the only time you 'Rip Into Prey' is when you break into church!!!*




* Usain Bolt won the Olympic`s 100m sprint race n got the world record. Hypochondriac scared of being ill,...illest..etc
* 'Deuce' is when the score is a draw in tennis
*Mussolini was an Italian fascist dictator who was called El Duce (L Duce)
*His crew`s called R.I.P (Rip Into Prey/Pray)

damn duc3 if ur gonna call niggas out u gotta try.
U cant use the excuse of "i didnt have time" or "didnt feel like it"
on every verse u post.

ur "E-40 shots" bar totally missed.

the best bar u had was the crackin the code line..

Cat sweep to Cee...

that "lie bout the streets" line was viscous. it was the highlight of the battle


1-0

Flow - Duce (usually Cee is very clean in is flow, but there were a few parts that seemed a bit forced)
Punches - Cee4 (Just had better punches over Duce's, Duce used a couple that seemed a little played)
Personals - Cee4 (Just barely, neither of them really had any personals but Cee4 tipped the scales in his favor with the "R.I.P. bar")
Wordplay/Name play - Tie (About even in this category)
Creativity - Cee4 (C was a little more entertaining in my opinion, but both guys had their amusing parts)

Vote = Cee4

Current Score: 2-0 in favor of Cee4

I forfeit

2-0 to me