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i Wanna Know Who Y`all Think Won ..

R.SON.aLL

Expos : AR = Arkansas intials ..
Vince Carter is a B Ball Player ..
Anythin Else U Should Get, if U Don`t Then Don`t Vote ..


Fuck it Kill `em Both

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i`m Takin This Tourny! As if i`m "Keyin Up Lion" Verses, i`m "Lockin These Cats" ..
Cockin Threes Back, at These Homos U`ll See "ARs in Fame" Like "Popular Gats"..

Now F.a.m.e

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Winnin? i Doubt Liar, U Act Like a Bitch, as if U Was Miss Doubt Fire, i`m Cloud Flyer ..
Ain't No Clouds Higher, R.Son /Arson Quick to Leave "F.a.m Killed" Like "House Fires" ..
Waterguns Only Time He Sprayed a Toy, He Tha Type to Get Like Mike, Only to Play Wit Boys ..
Ya Place Decoyed!, Punches Similar to "Dirty Tabloid Scandals" How They Quick to Leave "Fame Destroyed" ..
Might Score Wit ya Moms, and Probably Jam Her, So Loose i Gotta Fist it & Body Slam Her ..
Spit Wit Naughty Grammer, Wit More Glocks "Flashin in Front Of Fame" Than "Paparazzi Cameras" ..
i`m King, So U Better Play ya Position B!, Like "Greetin Novels" i`m "Makin U Hi Story/Histoy" ..
He Likes to Beg, His Sexuality is Compared to "Overnight Celebs" Cus "Fame is a Mystery" ..

.. Dead Tha Witness too ..

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Mah Punches So Hard, i ain't Never Gotta Keep a Weapon, Make Dudes Seek Depression ..
Beatin Me? I Hardly Doubt, Bars Quick "Take RVs Out" Like "Trailor Park Repossesion" ..
Bitch I Can Make Liars Bend From Mah Slugs, i`m So Much Flyer Than `Bout Nine Doves ..
i`m Better, ya Drops Starve, i Can "Stop AR`s Hot Bars" Like "Arkansas Firemen in Night Clubs" ..
Mah Lines Have ya Bird in a Box, Bars So Nuggets, On Mah Cock, Tryin So Hard to Suck it ..
Boy Far From Bustin, Cus Only Time "Vince Able /Vincible to Shoot" is Them "Carter Buckets" ..



F.a.m.e

Yellin "FUCK S.A.W.!" like a movie critic. Give me my props g! Slay me? U NOT ME!/
Arv... "Its cloberrin time"? STFU, Do not speak! Closest u'll get to "F.A.M.E." is starring as a teenage "Mr. Miyagi"!!






WAX ON, WAX OFF!!! BANZAI DANIELSON!! BANZAI!!

Judgin by looks, ya Moms Been 'tag-teamed' by Miyagi and Ja Rule! Yall fags food!/
Arv, YA WACK DUDE... act hard fool? Seriously,Vin 'Diesel'? not even if mu'fucka bathes in 'car fuel'!!/


REAL TALK

Yall pussies bout get dropped. So stay down! Cause the King'll never lose to these gay clowns!/
So stop actin tough, its K.O.K. bitch! Can't master us, nobody "Seesaw/See S.A.W." on the streets, unless dey @ "Da playground"!/





U soft, weak, tender!!! Bow & show some respect bruh! Cause u'll never be the Champ! Just a pretender!/
Your sets dismembered! Fake G! You wouldnt see "Rell" 'Raise Hell' if he "Bench Pressed" dips' members!




EASY... Dudes name is Rell... "Hell Rell" as in the dude from dip set.


R.Son., you low budget ass mu'fucka! You'll never be famous... NOW GO GET ME SOME SNEAKS!!/
Size 12... PLEASE? We now know y he say "Nikes"! Hes just earnin his 10 bucks a week!!!/

The Return Edition: ..( R.SON.aLL )..


I know everybody seen dude say "Nikes" all the fuckin time, and yall guessed right. Mothafucka is some low-class employee for em. I know yall heard bout dudes payin third world country peeps some light dough to put in work and start makin them kicks!


Back to Arvincible! His bawtt's gaped! Cause this pussy tried to prove he was "Dynamiq" & got raped!/
For fucks sake! How the fuck "Arvincible/Arvin Civil" if he shops for 3 dollar beanies and can't nail a hot date?!!/

Dynamiq vs Arvincible(Dynamiq)


HOW THE FUCK YOU GON' GET RAPED BY THIS DUDE?!!

Before some cats don't get the word. (Civil=adhering to the norms of polite social intercourse).


Old ass bum! Only time "24" hot on the net is shoppin for a "Kobe Bryant Jersey"! Aint nobody wack as this herb B!/
The outcome for u? It'll be the worst g, cause u were raised by a "single mom" cuz "R.Son./our son came out a pussy" through a 'cesarean surgery'!/

The Return Edition: ..( R.SON.aLL )..


Expo= Dude is 24 years old, raised by a single mother.. I'm pretty sure yall know wtf cesarean surgery is.


F.A.M.E.s the hottest fool! his bars dumb, aint no wonder his ex bitch left em w/ an 'Ice Box' when she "out da dude"!/
So you fire? I DOUBT IT FOOL! Cause R.Son. is/Arsonist hot? Not even when he 'burnin houses' through!/

The Return Edition: ..( R.SON.aLL )..


I KNOW YALL PEEPED HIM SAYIN "I got an ice box where my heart used to be"... PUSSY!!


Arvincible

The expos are on the other side of the "||" just to clarify that they aren't just bs talk like most of FAME's verses...

...to the judges

Read-quick! See I don't need-pics to make my verses seem-sick! So don't bother ridin-FAME... ||
Now witness my rhymes-enflame, cuz I'll put more "dots" on these kids than whats "inside-their-names!!" || F '.' A '.' M '.' E '.' & R '.' Son '.' All '.' << that's a lotta dots!!

Thank u my sweet voters....now first to rip: Ar.Son.All

See the blast-deliverin when I back-the-trigger-in, break ya arms as easy as an action-figure's-is! ||
Cuz my punch is quick to "catch the Arsonist" like I tracked-some-cigarettes and matched-his-fingertips!! || CSI status..

So can "R-try-this"/ Arthritis yall? Nah, Not even with "messed up joints," this lame-is-lacking-balls!! ||
You are "no challenge" cuz only time I see "R-testin/Artest"-in me is playin a "game-of-basketball!!" || NBA 2k8!

And I cant afford-to-lose, got ur kids pushin "papa on wheels" how the flow "shorten-dudes" ||
Punches'll more-than-bruise...Mah bars will leave "R." K.O.'d faster than "Randy Orton-moves!!" || WWE!

....And FAME?

Heres a bandaid for ur future-scars.. cuz Arv'll now "go-through-ya-bars" similar to "prison-breaks..." ||
See this bitch-is-fake cuz the truth is the only time u'll ever see "F-up" is in "big-mistakes!" || oops..Bye bye!

A half nude man on ya pic.. n still u win-some-how? When only time u 'spittins' when 'flem-comes-out'!! ||
Damn!! u known to be a "tranny" cuz if u twist "F.A.M.E" around u'll see that "A FEM"-jumps-out!! || omfg ur a fag...

I got the best-insults... you niggas couldn't "take my lines" If you put my "text-in-quotes", ||
Afraid of FAME? Nahh, ill rest-his-pulse!! cuz the only time niggas "avoid F" is in fucking "test-results!!" || F.ailure!!!

Time to end this homosexual pedophilic bitch...

"Fame Ass" like 'Billy Gunn's-attire', only time he's "above me" is after I 'pull the ropes' n "hung-em-higher" || decapitated!
Look on the bright side, imma just give u an "L" n make u think ur rhymes really "was-on-fire!!" || FAME + L= FLAME..



yeah right nigga you aint hot..
Consider yourselves legitimately RIPPED...

Fuck ..This is A Long Ass Battle ..
i'll Read Tha Rest Tommorow & Leave My Vote ..
Only Read A Few Lines From Each User All Came Nice
I'ma Sign Up Fa That Site Now And See Whas Up On There

Aiight..
Fame Was Clownin Like Crazy.
How he get So Many Personals On you Rell?
To Be Honest i Feel Like.. Arv Had Some Real Played Stupid Shit
Actually Everyone Pretty Muched Used Played Out Wordplay
Only Decent Line Arv Had Was " Mah bars will leave "R." K.O.'d faster than "Randy Orton-moves!!" And Dat was Straight..

Fame.. Went Hard .. In Alot Of Places Yo...
Real Talk...
Vin 'Diesel'? not even if mu'fucka bathes in 'car fuel'!!/ < LMAO


The outcome for u? It'll be the worst g, cause u were raised by a "single mom" cuz "R.Son./our son came out a pussy" through a 'cesarean surgery'!/


Those Lines Was Tough...

Now Rell..
U`ll See "ARs in Fame" Like "Popular Gats"..

you Use Dat Punchline Setup Alot Rell... It was Coo Though..

Punches Similar to "Dirty Tabloid Scandals" How They Quick to Leave "Fame Destroyed" ..
^^ Fire

i`m King, So U Better Play ya Position B!, Like "Greetin Novels" i`m "Makin U Hi Story/Histoy" ..
He Likes to Beg, His Sexuality is Compared to "Overnight Celebs" Cus "Fame is a Mystery"

^^^ You went tough with Dat 2 ..

Boy Far From Bustin, Cus Only Time "Vince Able /Vincible to Shoot" is Them "Carter Buckets" ..




i`m Better, ya Drops Starve, i Can "Stop AR`s Hot Bars" Like "Arkansas Firemen in Night Clubs" ..



Tough..


Overrall.. It's Close With F.a.m.e And Rell in My Opinion
I Dont Kno Who dat Niggah is.. But he Came Straight..
In The Sense Of Dismantlin Lines Fame Got it..

But In the Sense Of Who came Sicker.. Rell got it..
Arv had a Few Decent Lines himself.


But my Overrall Vote gotta be..
Rell.. By a inch Dough..
Cause F.a.m.e Came Somewut Correct

Shit - decent battle.. everyone came correct, a mix of hot plays.. average plays, and some played shit..

seen the see-saw / playground before - RV = ARV - been done, F - up and failure been done too / vince carter been done, but not in that way..

Overall - if i hadda vote - i'd prob go ARV - when his plays where original - they hit harder in my opinion.. RKO was hot, dot shit was hot, closr was hot - his flow and multis where hot shit too.. he had some played shit- it wernt all good - but because it was 'personal' to Fame - because of the name - it still hit..

R.son.all - had some hot shit.. though you had the same problem i noticed in other battles.. you come with different plays - of the same concept - fame and celebrities.. this time.. 3 plays in a row of the same basic idea.. which kinda gets repetitive and works against you.. they all still cool plays.. but you gotta mix it up a bit more.. also.. the closer..

and this applies to all three - what makes a wordplay work or people to go OH shit.. is when it works both ways cleanly.. ill take R's closer as an example..



"Cus Only Time "Vince Able /Vincible to Shoot" is Them "Carter Buckets" .."

its a nice play.l.. but when you read it - "Vince able to shoot", but then you read it the other way... Vincible to shoot - that doesnt have any kind of play - it barely makes grammatical sense, which takes away from it.. thats my opinion anyways.. R came correct, nice flow and multis

fame came correct too, alot of personals, ceaserian birth was nice, raise hell, and myagi where funny too, he had the persoanl plays but i felt sometimes they where lacking.. or could have been worked better.. flow was slightly weaker than the other two

overall nice battle..

Thanks mark...

Lol so many ppl agree that the FAME dude is weak as fuck, whoever though his shit was hotter than mine has to be on crack or mad hatin on me lmao...played stupid shit hazard? Whatever dude idc what u say man im so passed ur level, lol, I love ur hate though... anyways mark ur breakdown was dope and definately non biased. Good stuff.

He is Better Then you when it Comes 2 Clownin you Dumbbastard
i Cant Stand How Cocky You Are... Lets Go On Anotha Site.. Anyotha One..
Both Regista.. So i Can murda You With no D/R..

Nahh u been finished, I only talk shit where appropriate, u said all my shit was stupid and played so I had to say something. If FAME just wanted to get personal and talk shit all day then he can, but that's all he did, u can give him that cat, but ur still biased enough to put me below him... sooo what does that make u? Lol lets wait for what other ppl say about this... its okay hazard, don't cry. I won't say mean things to u anymore lol

See Me On Another Site.
And For ya Info Son..
Clownin In a REAL battle Helps
i Been Done? Never Son.. You Noticed Noone's Every Stopd Me?
EVER..
ima God damn Force Son... Nothing Phazes Me B...
See Me On Anotha SIte if Not No Talking ..

Lol no talking it is...I agree, no ones stopped u... from looking like a "dumbbastard, fa real cuz u juss murda ya self"

Gtfo stop spamming this thread

Y`all Niggas are Dumb ..
Shit ..

Anyways Mark Koo Breakdown .
Also When U Give People Advice U Should Do Tha Same ..
Cus U Do Tha Same Exact Thing in a Few Battles ..
Ex: U Vs Prophet ..
& Since When Has Hip Hop Been about Grammer? Lol
But Okay Koo ..

Haz Yeah F.a.m.e is Decent to Me ..
I Think Arv Did Better Tho ..
But U May Have Seen Different Cus it`s yo` Opinion ..
Thas What Seem Niggas Gotta Respect & Accept ..

I dunno what you mean by that... but i checked my prohet battle and all where acceptable... a bit of a stretch maybe lol, but all made sense both ways..

no doubt i may slip up on occasion, or realise it not gonna exactly work but try and get away with it lol...

i know you aint takin' it personal, but you gettin in the defensive when i was just pointin' out a problem i noticed.. just a tip from writer to writer lol.. and grammer is a big part in wordplay - the whole reason you split a play with a "/" and write it out differently... is too show that you are using two different thoughts combined to make a punch.. if it only works one way then it isnt as effective - imo - this is heavy critique btw.. dont get me wrong... you one of the top one the site.. so of course im gonna point out small flaws.. if someone on the low tier dropped that i'd think it was cool... but you have to expert 'perfection' from the one of the top heads..

Cus Only Time "Vince Able to Shoot" is Them "Carter Buckets" - this would have worked lol, coulda just used the ambigious vince - in both their names to create the hit.. - but you used Vinceable...

so the other way....

Cus Only Time "Vincable to Shoot" is Them "Carter Buckets"... "vincible to shoot" in this doesnt make any sense.. which is why it is weaker imo... ya dig?

i was trying to work it another way with the vincable concept, but damn lol, doest seem to be any, hard concept to work in..

anyways no hate... just tryna help..

coo'..

i See What U Sayin Mark, it`s No Hate ..
i Juss Think it Works imo, No as in a Two Meanin Punch ..
But Juss a One Way Play Punch Type Of Thing ..
i Wasn`t Tryin to Do a Double Meanin Punch ..
Juss Usin tha Vince Able Shit ..
But Koo` Shit On Tha Tips ..
Appreciated ..

Rell u wouldn't accept and respect others' opinion if it was against u... some niggas just gotta learn when its time to look at something without taking anything into the personal perspective, I only responded that waybecause of the way he worded it, same goes for u.. Nothing dumb about it. I didn't have to get defencive about anything.

^ .. If U Haven't Noticed I've Took a lot Of Shit From "People`s Opinions" ..
So U Can Miss Me Wit That Shit ..
I've Learned to Accept Everybody`s Opinion ..
Seems Like Nobody Has Gave Me Tha Credit For That ..
But if U Wanna "Get Mad" about What I Said ..
Go Ahead Like I Told U On Aim ..
i Don't Care Dude ..
I Know U Came Harder Than Fame, But if U Wanna Bitch Back & Forth Wit a Nigga That Doesn't Stop Arguin Waste ya Time it ain't Mine ..

Yeah aight like I said fuck it, lets see what everyone else says about this battle...