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[font=Comic Sans MS]Ill burn these lames in a pit, Im like a nazi burying these newbs when they try to lie
Only difference between me and Hitler, is that dude actually left somma the jews alive
Messiah spit Fiyah? Never, dudes in need of training, fire Ill spit back atcha
Always requesting posts, this guy gets less feed then kids in South Africa!
Ill splatter bloodshed, Ill cut ya fuckin chord loose, he cant see me, nah
If Miilz avy is Papoose, then I guess that means V.I.P's should be Remy Ma
Meet new users with lips to fry, they miss to cry with my twisted euthanize
Try me? Change my name to Jack, to help you out with ya assisted suicide
Who am I, an animal mistake for a cannibal when "I.Eat.Rappers" n grin till dead
Even I need to get fed, and my bars are sandwichin u like using ya skin for bread
Your lyrics are gay, lame, when I spit its insane that sends shot to ya brain
Tame ass rappers gets slain, specially when u accept battles then go M.I.A.
This guys thinking that his flows sick when sublimnally he jus wants mo dick
Think your drops are good? Only thing lyrical bout u is havin Pun as ur pro pic
Hide your fuckin face slash your mouth so that the blood u sippin is leaking
In ur pic you already dead, but Ill kill u again jus 2 say Im rippin the reaping
Seaping through these users blood flow, best interest to keep away n stay far
This cats a pussy, only time you hear "5 Mikes" mentioned is at a fuckin gay bar
Where the fucks the loyalty when the team knows Im bringing all the royalties
Fuck u didnt put me on a crew collab for, ask me shits weak n crews gettin old for me
It's not that I'm cocky, its that Im over all the gay shit, Im not gonna deface the crew
But if everyones so good at smashing s.a.w., Why are the crews numbers 8 to 2?
This aint no hate to you, but I aint reppin for people who lose n leave so soon
Its so easy to escape for crews, thats probably why I cant seem to relate to dudes
Stall ya bars, brawl n come out with scars, verses crisp leavin ya whole face raw
Most of you kids cant believe what u witnessing n seein, Alpha jus left R.I.P for S.A.W.?![/font]

Lol welcome to SAW...

Dope verse, really angry..

I felt the multis, and the personals stand out the most..

Deface a crew, 8 to 2, lol

Good Shit

Sickest shit I ever seen Bill write.

Damn.

No offense to any of the niggaz included, but that shit was kind of a murdering! haha

Just the dopest bars to me...
"Meet new users with lips to fry, they miss to cry with my twisted euthanize
Try me? Change my name to Jack, to help you out with ya assisted suicide
Who am I, an animal mistake for a cannibal when "I.Eat.Rappers" n grin till dead
Even I need to get fed, and my bars are sandwichin u like using ya skin for bread"

I'ma give it a 10/10

sum good punches the mutlies were hot shit sum of the punches were pretty good

but i jus need to corect one thing

it says Messiah spit Fire never

really it's Messiah Spit Fire Forever

10/10 dats 4 sho right there damn boy u got off nigga props on dat haha keep droppin nigga

the first section was dope. some killer punchlines. especially the hitler and papoose lines. problem was that after this section it kinda fell off a bit to me.

Ill burn these lames in a pit, Im like a nazi burying these newbs when they try to lie
Only difference between me and Hitler, is that dude actually left somma the jews alive
Messiah spit Fiyah? Never, dudes in need of training, fire Ill spit back atcha
Always requesting posts, this guy gets less feed then kids in South Africa!
Ill splatter bloodshed, Ill cut ya fuckin chord loose, he cant see me, nah
If Miilz avy is Papoose, then I guess that means V.I.P's should be Remy Ma
Meet new users with lips to fry, they miss to cry with my twisted euthanize
Try me? Change my name to Jack, to help you out with ya assisted suicide

the rest was average compared to the opening bars

Thanks for all the feed guys.

I'm so incredible.

That I freepost anywhere I want.

Chuuuuuuuuuuch!

i Agree Wit Cee4, This Was a Koo Piece ..
Came Out Swingin in Tha First Few Bars ..
But it Seemed Like ya Arms Got Tired too Fast ..
Tha Closin Bars Were Mah Favorite Tho ..
Like i Told U On aim, U Gotta Have Tha Middle Be Juss as Great as an Openin ..
Cus Some People Might Read Some Wack Shit & Be Like "i Don't Wanna Read This Shit No More"
So Work On That ..
Koo Drop ..& Welcome to S.A.W ! ..Lol

i think rell said it best man, youve came a long way since ive been out!! the openin 6 bars or so was fire dawg. really showed ur improvement, the middle was so so, alot of filler and such but still filled wit personals which never hurt, and the endin was jus crazy homie, u went bizurk on em'.