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ok this is my first official track. im used to freestyle and rippin on dudes so this is kinda new. i made the beat and wrote the lyrics in about 4 minutes. lol (this was made during the commercials)(i was watching naruto) any way all i hade was a mic so i thought id make up for it by screwin my vocals and then recording over the screwed vocals. this is the result

Again...glad to see you join up on the site man.

Trust me, like I said...people here will tell you what they think you do good on and tell you where they think you could use sum improvement.
Occassionally you'll run across a hater or sumone talkin shit...but it comes with the territory.

Anyways, I'll be the first to feed ur joint. Like I told you on myspace. Vocals are very very very low. They need to come up, it made it hard to understand everyword you said. But from what I could make out...you were able to ride the beat nice. The beat was coo...it complimented your flow. It's good to see an artist who produces his beats and then spits on 'em! But yea...turn up the vocals when you edit the track and try not to use so much of an effect on ur voice. Natural vocs sound alot better.

Not bad for ur first track ever...keep droppin bruh!

thnx man lol ima dropp some more in the mornin