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INSOMNIA

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You ever feel like the reason that you couldn't sleep at night was because there was something wrong with you!? And I don't mean like you feel sick...but something wrong in the sense that something in you just ain't right!? We all have demons...but demons only come out at night. And I know that when my enemies are asleep...the dark side of me is wide awake and out in the streets in hope to catch one of them awake and alone. Damn...I just can't sleep!!!
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"INSOMNIA"
Kurse feat. G-Baby
Album: Insomnia
Written By: R. Bueno & J. Garcia
Mixed By: R. Bueno
Produced By: Slantize
Recorded @ D-Lab 21 in Lombard, IL
Anger Manij'ment Entertainment Inc.
Shadowville Productions
All Rights Reserved 2008 ©

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Post by HKX »

yo I had peep dis track out yesterday ya'll niggaz snapped on dat didn't even kno G was gonna be on it lol shit is wicked especially da outro much props my nigga dat shit has me rollin hard
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Post by Haz »

I Liked The Beat Niggah, Coo Concept For Ya Joint..
I Thought You Rode The Beat Right For Ya Hook
U Got It In With The Lyrics For The Concept
Same With Dat Niggah G.. He Sorta Sound Lyk Kadafi From the Outlawz.
Jus a Lighta Pitch Of Voice..

Anyways Its Haz A.k.a. Fuck niggahz.
& I Think This Track Decent Niggah, i Liked That Otha Political Shit more
Jus Cause The Concept..

Leave Me Feed Niggah "Back To The Shed" - Diss.. ( Scripture)
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

I Was Feelin This Shit, I Be Havin Those Type Of Nights Sometimes ..Lol
You Described it Fairly Good ..
I Loved Tha Beat ..
Concept Was Pretty Nice, Mos Deffo Flowed Wit Tha Beat ..
Hook Was Nice ..
I Didn't Really Like Tha Openin Verse, But You Closed it Good Tho ..
Flow & Delivery Was Tha Best Things Outta Tha Piece Tho ..
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Loved Tha Beat...Has A Creepy Mysterious Feel To It..Which Is Pretty Muched Linked To Insomnia.. So Nice Beat Choice....Smoothe And Fits A Gloomy Situation.. Not To Flamboyant Which I Liked


Lyrics: Nice Tone,Nice Flow, Lyrics Were Good With Detail,And Nice Explanation...Beggining Was Fairly Straight But Then It Got Better ..Straight Chorus....Nice Story Telling ..... Nice Track Man..Very Nice...
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Post by MagicMark »

As said, beat is eerie and cool, fits the tone of the song well.

hook is good, not really catchy, but a nice few lines to get the point of the song across

you had two nice verses, second one was prolly the better of the two, hotter flow and better lyrics but both where cool

g-baby had a tight verse too, came correct, flow and presence all good..

nice job..
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Post by Cee4 »

liked this one here. i agree with whats already been said. the beat set the tone nicely. i loved the hook. killed it with the flow as usual. the other guy did well too. props
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

didnt like the hook 2 much man idk why,just didnt have that 'kurse' feel to it ya kno?the verses were str8 tho,they definetly made up for what i thought was lacking in the hook,good track nonetheless. id give it a 8/10 was feelin it mostly

[sorry for not breakin it down enough but im just tryna return some feed to ppl b4 i gotta boucne again]
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Post by J-Majikk »

i feel you on this one fam. its like this song was made just for me dogg.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

haha i was plannin to use to this beat earlier this year, good shit, the hook is hot as hell, nice on the mixing, i like that part where u get consistent with the rhyme scheme, multis keep improvin with every track , g's verse was dope too, i know he wasn't sober when he recorded that haha so props to him gettin that down
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Post by Viral »

i think i was drunk wen yall were recordin dis..hahaha..i remember it...jst baerly..lol...dis tracks dope...dat dark shit is always dope...lol...i havent heard a dark track from ya lately either...atleast..that i can remember..hahaha...G got off on dis too...shits raw...makes me wanna...smash my face into a window till it breaks!..LOL!
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