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6 BARS, no crew votes or dickriding, explained votes only

catagories

Vocab
Punches
Wordplay
Humour
Flow
Structure

+ any other cats u wanna add

u got 24 hours

.. Lmao i`m Not Spittin First So You Can Study Mah Drop Fam ..

& Why Do You Have Humor as a Cat? Lmao Wtf
Replace Humor Wit Metaphors ..
& add Nameplay
Make it 48 Hours, i`ma Busy Head ..

im new but ey fuck it ill drop first....

Slap this bitch hand him a cane and make this nukka RETIRE
my rhymes effect you like anti- coagulants to VAMPIRES (look up anti coagulantsomething to do with blood

you aint a hero so dont put on a CAPE-AND-STUNT
like paris hilton i got a video camera with a TAPE for when i RAPE-THIS-CUNT

drink from that furry cup put ya mum back on the COASTER
it aint sunday but ima still ROASTER while she snorts coke thru a rolled up POSTER

first battle im a sin, ima take this win from this FOOL
this gay fagg sucks fat dick even take it in the ARSE-AND-ALL

listen MISTA or shud i say SISTA, go missing no one wuda MISSED YA
click clack quick blast leave u holier than a HARI KRISHNA

i kno ya mother cried its no suprise when you were born she ATTACKED YA
its 3 votes here saying NO so go FLOW on the X-FACTOR (music talent show on tv)

i await ur reply

my first text battle for a while

first battle im a sin, ima take this win from this FOOL
this gay fagg sucks fat dick even take it in the ARSE-AND-ALL


Rhyme Scheme: Not found

my first text battle for a while

Make it your last.

yeah thanks for that... real useful input


if u cant get the rhyme scheme u need glasses.


and all is an english saying.... as in "to love some one worts and all" or "i bet she would sleep with a tramp and all"

arse and all is a play on his name

Fool & All Don't Rhyme Stupid ..

Quick Key ..

Fuck ya Life Bitch ..

First Off, i`ll Strike ya Wig, 6 Feet Deep, ya Fam Must Like to Dig ..
Snatch ya Wife & Kids, U`ll Get 8 / Ate, So Like "Soap Operas" U Got "One Life to Live" ..
Every Mic i Rip, to Slide ya Ribs, Get "Smoked For a Small Amount" Like "Unpricey Cigs" ..
I`m Runnin all Bets, You Betta Strive For Bids, "Cut U From Bottom" Like "Knives in Sigs" ..
Nukka i`ll Make ya Heart Rate Stop, i`m Tha Fly Kid That Have Star Dames Flock ..
Ya Flow? No Hard Flamed Drops, "Flim Decoration Auction" Only Time ya "Bar Gains / Bargains Props" ..
I'll Take ya Whole Set Down, Slugs Ringin in Tha Air, Like a Jet Sound ..
Hot Rhymes in This Drop, Leave 9 Lives in a Box, Like Pet Pounds ..
Test Me i Snipe With Tha Pump, Throw U in Sewer Put ya Life in Tha Slumps ..
Dead, is Tha Price For ya Fronts, "Shit On This Pusssy" Quicker Than Girls "Wipe ta Tha Front" ..

votes please

Vocab:9lives
Punches:rell
Wordplay:rell
Humor:rell
Flow:rell
Structure:rell
metaphors:rell
nameplay:9lives

vote:rell

this was literally a 'cat' sweep for rell lol, no hate.. even left humor in it for 9 but i just found rell's punches funnier, which is wat made them better to me, only wordplay was bar gains.. and nameplay was arse and all, wasn't a bad battle tho 9's pretty decent and atleast he knows his elements, i noticed a little diversity in it which is always nice to see but i felt that rell just came better in mainly every aspect, watever was lacked 9 picked up, overall imo. rell was more creative and personal, while still keepin the flow

cat sweep: rell.
YO 9Lives keep up man. Just elevate. Dont be discouraged. Rell's a beast of a writer so dont worry. Lmao.

yo man i didnt expect to win first battle i just need to see what you guy like in a battle where im from i do live mc battles where its about humour and simplicity. sometimes multi's which i dont think people have considered

spent literally 5 mins on it i prefer to key-syle (freestyle )


watch this space for next battle


more votes and comments please

straight, ey if u want.. i been lookin to keystyle battle for a minute, hit me up with a pm and we could get it goin on in a chat with a group of maybe 6-8 so it doesn't get too roudy and out of control

n e ways good battle once again

2-0 uppin for votes

R'Son All

Fuck ya Life Bitch ..

First Off, i`ll Strike ya Wig, 6 Feet Deep, ya Fam Must Like to Dig ..
Snatch ya Wife & Kids, U`ll Get 8 / Ate, So Like "Soap Operas" U Got "One Life to Live" ..
Ehh no..8 wordplay is played..and the soap opera line is weak.
Every Mic i Rip, to Slide ya Ribs, Get "Smoked For a Small Amount" Like "Unpricey Cigs" ..
smoke lines are played as well..
I`m Runnin all Bets, You Betta Strive For Bids, "Cut U From Bottom" Like "Knives in Sigs" ..
ehh i see where your going but its reaching..
Nukka i`ll Make ya Heart Rate Stop, i`m Tha Fly Kid That Have Star Dames Flock ..
Ya Flow? No Hard Flamed Drops, "Flim Decoration Auction" Only Time ya "Bar Gains / Bargains Props" ..
you say bar gain like Bar-Gin(hard g)..so this is forced..and wack
I'll Take ya Whole Set Down, Slugs Ringin in Tha Air, Like a Jet Sound ..
Hot Rhymes in This Drop, Leave 9 Lives in a Box, Like Pet Pounds ..
predicatable..its obvious you were going to say this when his name is 9 lives
Test Me i Snipe With Tha Pump, Throw U in Sewer Put ya Life in Tha Slumps ..
Dead, is Tha Price For ya Fronts, "Shit On This Pusssy" Quicker Than Girls "Wipe ta Tha Front" ..
Nah.

9 Lives

Slap this bitch hand him a cane and make this nukka RETIRE
my rhymes effect you like anti- coagulants to VAMPIRES (look up anti coagulantsomething to do with blood
Nope.

you aint a hero so dont put on a CAPE-AND-STUNT
like paris hilton i got a video camera with a TAPE for when i RAPE-THIS-CUNT
Nope.

drink from that furry cup put ya mum back on the COASTER
it aint sunday but ima still ROASTER while she snorts coke thru a rolled up POSTER
Ehh..?

first battle im a sin, ima take this win from this FOOL
this gay fagg sucks fat dick even take it in the ARSE-AND-ALL
doesnt rhyme..you must not have glasses my friend..

listen MISTA or shud i say SISTA, go missing no one wuda MISSED YA
click clack quick blast leave u holier than a HARI KRISHNA
holy lines are played..stop it.

i kno ya mother cried its no suprise when you were born she ATTACKED YA
its 3 votes here saying NO so go FLOW on the X-FACTOR (music talent show on tv)
Wack.


Overall: i believe this was prolly the weakest battle i've ever seen on this site..rells verse was just played concepts and weak material while 9 lives didnt know what the hell he was saying and didnt come with a good battle strategy..but rell came a bit stronger i guess..even though his punches were completely forced..anywayz good battle ya'll but i have to give this to Rell.

^ Like I Said it Was a Quick Keystyle ..
All Of 5 Mins to Put Together ..

But Mods Close This Shit ..

3-0 KO

first battle im a sin, ima take this win from this FOOL
this gay fagg sucks fat dick even take it in the ARSE-AND-ALL

Lmao did this nigga really just say that Lmao Wow...