Hip Hop Forum

First round so its.

4-6 barz.
No Biting
No Recycling
No Feeding
Both are due with-in three days from the date,
This thread is made. Or automatic Dq.
Either Way. You Need To Spit!!
Don't argue with the rules, or automatic Dq : D
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Good Luck

you bite, but got caught-fast, spitting them hot-raps//
now ur getting "thrown-back" like a shot-glass, to scotts-class//

then the glock-blast, fag dont get mad, ur just in my path//
this battle is like Aiden, only the win you can't have//

sit back n laugh, as i drop "ky" right off the map//
i often rap, about to erase kyle like a scrapped south park draft//

this is my craft, and i'll tell you this kid don't know half//
i'm a surgeon with raps, certain like graphs, closest you get to having balls
is ekoms shaft//

i'm sicker then my enemies, i got aids metaphorically//
you have HIV, accordingly this tourny is over, give the award to me//


This is pretty quick key

Exclamations
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1. He bite before ( claims it was a joke, may have been )
2. Aiden is a girl
3. His name is kyle
4. Aids is her nickname
5. Scott is said to be wack but most people.

is it tom or ian that Im seein/
leave you confused like I was speaking Korean/

Bout Aiden that was classified Ill leave you in the class tied/
so fat i could push you in ocean just to pass the tide, your ass is fried/

stop cheating the site with your speech and catch a beating in spite/
no friendly greeting in sight like a leech this flow is depleteing your might/

you want to get up close and intimate/
wheres your female oh im sorry their just not into it/

tommy boy took this

rhyme scheme was fairly even, but tom excelled in all other aspects of it

to make this short... ky-ill had better multis and flow and seemed to entertain me more...

tom had wordplay and creativity as well as more personals

both of u kinda tied with the punchlines since ky-ill's seemed better yet tom had more..

either way ky-ill was kinda dq'd since the rules said no feeding and he did in his 2nd bar...

yea well kyle impressed me and like ekoms said its really close to judge but since tom came above in the entertaining,personals and vocab ill have to give this too him by the way that was a good line tom or ian could have made it better but yea keep it up.

2-0

Uppin

I'd say 3-0 i think ekoms gave it to you

alright then, wraps it up