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Quick Expression..Recorded
Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 9:16 pm
by кℓαѕѕιιcк
Yo I Just Felt Like Recordin Something 4 Da Syte So I Just Put Down One Of My Recent Verses...
Lemme Know What U Fink
Plz Excuse the Downgraded,HomeStudio Quality..[font=Arial Black] [/font]
Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:47 am
by Kurse
Definately could use some work bruh...ur unquestionably rough around the edges. Ur bars are written either too long or you spit ur bar too slow but it causes you to fall off beat alot more often than you should. Yea, the quality was definately not good, but we're not commenting on ur mic quality. Lyrically is was so/so...not very complex. Concept was very common. But I'm definately not tryin to discourage you from dropping more material in anyway...I'm just telling you what I think that way u can work on it, up ur game & elevate! Also...this was very very short. Would like to see some longer pieces!
Keep doin ur thang, keep practicing & keep droppin.
Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 7:31 am
by HKX
i gotta agree wit kurse on dis one homie u need 2 upgrade a lot did u jus start off or naw wat u should do b4 u record is practice da shit u wrote 1-3 times at least listen 2 da way ur sayin da words and put sum nutz in it when u flow pretend like ur performin or sumthin keep writin everyday i mean everyday dont stop until u find ur stilo and freestyle a lot cuz dat shit helps a lot it'll make u find ur swag a lot of niggaz dont freestyle and when u spit shit off da top u could find ways 2 be creative wit words keep droppin homie stay up 1.
Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 2:21 pm
by кℓαѕѕιιcк
Alright,I Spit Slower coz if i spit at the normal pace it falls off the effin beat remember i am recording with a pc mic and i 256 ram comp the thang is slower than a grandma walking cross the street,anyway thx for the vice peace..
TC