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Watcha Back (Here I Come)

Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 6:35 pm
by The DZA
just a lil quicky
plz leave feedback

Ayo, my pen is rushin' down the paper like lightnin'/
And thunder, i'll make you like The Rescuers...down under//
Some say this i'm serious, haters say its mockery/
but i'm cuttin' off their words, like i was spittin' apostrophes//
Imma lyrical pitbull, not chain leash can hold me/
I'm comin' with the force like Obi Won Kenobi//
Call me the Joker, why so serious? i'm insane/
U'll never forget me, I'll carve my name in ya brain//
Split ya wig, untill u wearin' a toupée/
You ainta threat, i'll treat u like Y2K//
Fuck the octogon, I'm on a Rampage like Jackson/
I'll leave yall niggas like skinny gymnists doin' backflips//
Y'all in danger, and here i come, the rap savior/
Tryna fuck wth me is devient behavior//
Serve ya ass today, and double it tomarrow/
I'll cut up ya rhymes with blades shaper than Leonardo's//


link
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/quick ... 10103.html

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 2:57 am
by The DZA
16 views and no feed...uppin

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 4:39 am
by - Mutual -
okay sum of the lines didnt rhymes
but the flow was aiight
had some good imagery inthere
i mean um i been here 3 months or ova sumin like dat
i only get one feed to my pieces if i'm lucky jus live without feed
fuck em all