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On my old forum we did this alot, see how long we could use to same rythm-scheme over and over again.

check 1, 2 I hear people got issues well i got ONE TO
hate kids so i scared ONE TO insanity n made u RUN TO
when you see me I even make the blunt RUN TO
robbed pacs name and only left him dat ONE 2
den seen ciara stepping 1 2 jacked her and left one tooth
lifes like the movie saw, stuck with a friend wit ONE NOOSE

explain a bit mo if ya do that i might get it right now it jus confusses me

uhh well, look at my verse. I continuessly rythmed with 1 2, or one two, run to. Just how long can you continue the rythm of whatever word(s) you choose. Get it?

get rid of this hated state its a greater fate
about the hated state its been stated late
the hated state thats stated late is actually fo a greater fate

this is consitency man:

im aiming for a greater fate, heavy cuz nobodys a greater weight
this bitch blew me once, she said fuck me cuz i grade her 8th
made her faint, because i shape shifted into a naked ape
grabed that slut, stretch'd her into a line longer than the equator makes
made her gape, paid her face, with a facial dat made her equator shake
theres only is or aints, you may beat me in a battle but is you greater? aint!

nice man dopeverses

[font=Comic Sans MS] keep dis cypher goin homie, kick these haters in the goin homie
acid im pouring, melting mics straight threw to duh morning!

im the illest, sike im garabge and if im not then yall isnt
but yalls a bunch of beatin women, Im the husband yellin "NO I DID"NT!"
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i'm gone keep this goin as long as it keeps goin
cus the fire i'm spittin melting like chernobyl(lol) if i keep it flowin

i'm the dopest nope i will quote wot iwrote
me beein the dopest nope will be the ropest tope

yo this aint a debut its a premier, kill u wen u appear
I did'nt see a reflection when i looked into the mirrior
fuck battlin I hate fussin with queers, shifted the gears
if u with me then cheers if not then i'll kill u like my piers
throw u off of the pier, im the definition of fear
your balls only dropped cuz u shivverd as soon as i came near

niggas know i pak the gat im mackin i the cadillac/pluss they know my gats a mac its kuzz i always stay strapped/ squrrze and then ur head will crack nd make you do the cabbage patch(lol)/kats will clik clak and leave ur flippin like an acrobat/niggaz know they kant see me like thay had some catoracs(w/e)/if not they must have lost thier mind need to go and track it back/tryin to kobe and get hit up wit a shaq attack// hood nigga?? you be eatin pussy like its cracker jack/ nigga want to clap at me so bet im gon clap him back/ anthrax in his mail like he got them taxes bak/ and im so sharp like i bathe in a pack of tacks/ i just popped a super pellet so im on a pack attack(wow)/ if im rollin wit my wolves u might just catch a pack attack/ rolled up in the triach just a couple seconds afta that/just rolled a blunt of sour diesel kuzz da pack is fat/ have you daughter lookin for a nigga like wheres majikk att


im new so tell me how i did

i think u did pretty well majikk kind of a violent flow which would be good if ya in a battle

yeah im from brooklyn so that violent shit comes natrual. thnx for the feed bak

i spit raps with animosity n full of shit stacks
i get mad n pick gats up jus to split brats
i hit that bitch comin up n trick cats

i smoke hella dro when im gettin some brain/
and the hot shit i spit fa sho will get in ya brain/
and if u bite ima have to put a tip in ya brain/
fuck i will wit the whole clip in ya brain/
/walk over to the body and im gettin your chain/
black white male female the shit is the same/
im the reason for his funeral gimme da blame/ and now i wanna light the droo boy gimmie da flame/
you want that nigga dead homie? gimmie the name/
i want shortti whole body baby gimmie da frame/
im ready to make money boy gimmie da cane/
try to jack me for the white boy im bringin the pain//..

what u guys think. i might record this