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okay jus a key style but well

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/paras ... html#87549

okay ha let me start by sayin nah fuck that

we be stealin ya necklace i'm wreckless when i test-this
we restless causin beef in the street i'm a men-ace
a failure to earth i got more than i deserve
a curse to disperse around the world it's the worst
a death dont hold ya breath i get on ya nerves
cant wait to observe wait-to-conserve any faggot hatin-on-earth
debatin creatin-there-slur i'm in no state-to-concur
testin fate-n-we-were gettin to late-to-be-served
people sayin cant be rushin-are-verse
we were crushed-n-we-learnt
theres haters in this world hangin off word-we-speak
it sounds absurd-to-me why am i in need
everybody knew it was there no body gave feed
to my scripts they ignored cus it was me
nah i doubt they did fuck it yes i agree!
shit i aint gone make it till i elevate
then rennovate back to a better place
back to my original face to face madness wit no grace
no pace dyin at any time fuck this i been displaced

feed pls

multis are improving slightly. their still kinda basic but considering where u were not too long ago ur improving. thhe whole piece seemed kinda forced to me. i dont know if it is me but some of it dosent make sense


shit i aint gone make it till i elevate
then rennovate back to a better place
back to my original face to face madness wit no grace
^^^^
so u want to elevate then go back... i dunno im confused

thanks fo da feed anyhow

uppin