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motion

Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:40 pm
by Subsist
motion, like the waves of an ocean
emotion of an object portraying devotion
ill smoke and blow my lungs wide open
and not care cause we're all immortal
up the cathedral steps he walks the portal
hopin, the gates of heaven are still open
i'll broker your pons at several installments
youll vomit your tonsils along-with your cortex
you'll seem-to-loose so much bodily fluid
till ur more see-through than an infrared beam dude
its important to produce vocals with a ball pen
your impotent if you think you can be that ocean

Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 3:41 am
by - Mutual -
good emotion
started better then got worse
jus about
it was good
more like a poem i thought
but good
keep'em comin

Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 3:49 pm
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
This Piece Was Decent Fam ..
It Was More Of a Poetical Piece imo ..
A lot More imagery and Abstract ..
Ya Know ..
As a Poem it`s Nice ..
As a Rap?
It`s Decent ..
Props Fam ..

Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 7:54 pm
by Subsist
mutual i thought i told you not to feed me any more ( along with sickest and dead)