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I just wanna let you know I dont wanna let you go. We gonna go live in the sky together.you are love of my life forever. I would never your sight. Being with for rest of my life was my dream. I cant stop thinking about you all do think about being with you. I choose you because you learn how treat a gurl. I love you to death thats how much I love you. You are the bestest lover i have ever had. Im glad I found someone like you everything I want. I need you in my life.

Im not done
I finish later

well the beginning was aiight but for poetry if u try rap u need to sort out ya layout it will help look at somebody else's layout that will help

Sounds great, no critique at all!

This was ok, u needa put more effort in the shit u write. but it wasnt bad though.

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