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my myspace is www.myspace.com/roachproductionz...and my aim is omg16micz hit me up we can chat..ill try to provide any advice possible..
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BigP wrote:I AM TRYING!
Look Honestly Man..Dawg..If You Wanna Have An Inch Of Respect..Take The Wigger Pic Off..
The Whole Hat And Bandana Aint Cool Man..But 4rl Get At Me..
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Don't get me wrong P...it's good that you try. Cause life ain't nuthin but "trial and error" You'll never know how good you can be unless you practice and keep at it. But take it from someone who does music for a living. This was a horrible track dawg. Seriously...I mean...it's good you wrote down the lyrics to read along with the track cuz without the mapping...I would've been lost listenin to this shit. I'm not a hater bro. But you fall off on the beat frequently...the structure in which it's written is very off balance and you have no emotion. It's obvious you just read what you write and don't feel a bit of it. You gotta FEEL THAT SHIT!!! You gotta spit that shit like you live, eat, breath & believe what the fuck ur talkin about! When you start talkin about non-existant $20,000 rings on ur finger n' shit...you just make urself seem dumb, ya know!? Be on that real talk kid. Don't talk about what you wish you had...talk about what you DO have. And if a bowl of Cherrio's is all you have...then God damn it rap about that then. Cuz then atleast you ain't foolin urself or anybody else as an artist.

Rule number 1 to being a good artist is to be true to yourself and your persona. If you're not gangsta kid...don't act gangsta. If you're a lil fat white boy that love black flava....then ride wit it. Atleast be true. I hope this doesn't discourage you from spittin and droppin here on illest...but I ain't gonna sugar coat shit for you either kid. This shit was garbage. But fuck it...take it...learn from it...and get back to the boards and try again. Real talk.

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Lawgix wrote:well well well... mr big p has shot a whack diss towards me and you said "this diss is gonna be ill?" lmmfaooooo get real kid... as i told u once and i'll tell u again u sound like a fuckin retarted kid drowning in a sink full of water... seriously i don't even know if i should respond to this or how i should! haha but the battle is set up in text battle grounds... go drop ur verse n shit... and if i feel like it... i may kill you on audio too... lmmfao @ the fat version of harry potter hahahahahahahaaaaaaa
no... that was me who sounded like a retard kid :roll: :)
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a lil fat white boy, nice adjectives, LMAOOOO

after drunken jesus is done with him, 99 percent chance he commits suicide
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Lol complexity.. u are god.... u don't say 99% chance... U KNOW if he commits suicide or not, ... god...
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complexity wrote:a lil fat white boy, nice adjectives, LMAOOOO

after drunken jesus is done with him, 99 percent chance he commits suicide
Oh fuck...some one erase this Thread...if Jesus see's this Illest is gonna have a lawsuit! lmfao

I just hope he never challenges Jesus or Me at anypoint to a battle. It just wouldn't be a good turning point in his life. :D
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Kurse wrote:
complexity wrote:a lil fat white boy, nice adjectives, LMAOOOO

after drunken jesus is done with him, 99 percent chance he commits suicide
Oh fuck...some one erase this Thread...if Jesus see's this Illest is gonna have a lawsuit! lmfao

I just hope he never challenges Jesus or Me at anypoint to a battle. It just wouldn't be a good turning point in his life. :D
God Only Knows What Jesus would say to this kid..LMAO..
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T-Stylez wrote:Lol complexity.. u are god.... u don't say 99% chance... U KNOW if he commits suicide or not, ... god...
I didn't make up that saying.
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Jesus would say summin like

Hey Big P, wutup SON, u ok? Keep ya chin up, kill 'em with the power of GOD!!!

Cuz jesus loves all. BUt yo i aint gonna judge about what jesus would say ... 4 real, i aint want no thunder on my head
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T-Stylez wrote:Jesus would say summin like

Hey Big P, wutup SON, u ok? Keep ya chin up, kill 'em with the power of GOD!!!

Cuz jesus loves all. BUt yo i aint gonna judge about what jesus would say ... 4 real, i aint want no thunder on my head


Oh No young blood...you're thinkin of Jesus Christ! lmao

We're talkin about Drunken Jesus...another member here on illest. P isn't gonna find salvation here...but similar to Mr. Christ...he will be judged! lol Thats for damn sure.
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lmfao, im working on a rap... and im actually puttin this whole shit in it...
Look at these 3 lines

But right now i try to make "recordz" that i should-sell
so i "Pick up" my life, Make "Big" attention like "P"
Turn attention into help to find a good life for T


dont ask about the good life thing, thats the topicy
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after u all brought what DJ would say to this kid... i started laughin already...
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lol
oh well, Propz to P for getting so much attention =P This is the way to get high, get alot of attention
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it may attention but its attention he don't want haha
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