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give me some time, as u already know my verse has been done since the age of dinosaurs, i just gotta get to a booth, how's everyone else comin along? i havn't heard anything from the rest of u

I got my verse all written, just gotta record it when my 2 month old is asleep and there's not too much noise comin' from the alley behind my apartment, then I'll have my verse all ready.

Loon, HKX- how it comin along for u?

Shits comin aight man. I should have it done real soon dont count me out

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iz coo Loon, we got no deadlines on this, so just let it flow when inspiration strikes

if i dont have this done by sunday, i should have it done that following thursday, i hope i'm not the first one done when i don't have my own equipment lol

Heeeeeey lets make it clear that we aint superstar rappers yet so some of us got bills to pay, which requires work. It will be done, and it shall be of epic proportions. Haha

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shit im not rushin, but i know with the amount of time around one of u assholes could've had it done already, im not saying you suck cause im sure you've been writing other shit, but i dont want this to sit n rot like every other failed collabo, i'm definitely having this recorded though, just be koo to see how u guys are goin about it so maybe i can touch a few things up to blend my shit in some

Yeah, I'm definitely recording mine soon too... to give u a picture of my verse, it starts off kinda slow, gradually builds up speed, 'till there's a couple lines spit real fast, then evens out for the last two bars... shit I'll just post my lyrics here since I know seeing other's lyrics can sometimes help me figure out my direction with shit... Depending on what ya'll come up with these lyrics could potentially be changed a bit, but as they now stand, here they be:

It's like my pen strikes straight to my soul's sight
where I hold tight to the path of my flow's flight//
It's like my ink sinks deep into my mind's eye
where my rhymes find the rhythm to rise high//
My vision is livin' inside these lines I'm spittin'
and that's why I write so vivid- despite the plights from within-
I fight wit my own image- to write these songs beyond any limits-
And I ain't one to give in-
even if I'm stuck in oblivion-
<fastest> I'm not givin' it up-
cuz I'm livin' in rhythms of love-
tryin' to elevate, renovate, celebrate in my innovations </fastest>
And I'll meditate 'till my mental state can eliminate all the fluff,
then my tongue-'ll-paint like a brush- to illuminate like the sun-
and my heart-'ll-beat like a drum- 'till that part-of-me has no blood-
It ain't hard-to-see that my arteries pump the art-in-me
and I'm far from done...

Ku man. Well i jus wrapped up the last track to me and hkx's mixtape so im all free now. This is my next project for me so im all focused now.

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good shit sic, i liked the flow alot, came off a lot better then some of the other drops i've seen from u

aight my shits done. all written out. ill have it recorded tonight and in your hands. 99.3% chance itll be done by tonight. no lie. heres what i wrote

i start the blount so i can spark some creativity,
crack my 32 to let the fluid soak within me,
i get the mental workin 'fore i even pick the pen up,
jot a couple thoughts down, then continue to pick the spit up/
i let the instromental fill the air with the weed smoke,
i feel it builin up, so now its time to let the heat go,
let the thought trickle from above, down below,
put my soul within the pen then start to make the ball roll/
according to my past, i must surpass what i have conquered,
so in these words to follow ill proceed to wake the monster,
its not like everyday i dont attempt to spit it smarter
its jus all these people judgin only seem to make it harder/
so now its time for action. get up out my seat recitin to the beat.
studio mates, quiet down, to hear a sneak peak.
i think i got it, pass the phones and hit record.
now its time to show these people why the fuck im in this for................


sounds alot better to the beat.

-- Thu Sep 30, 2010 4:29 am --

jus finished my verse and sent it to IC. get a move on it fellas!

Loon's verse is killer. I'm ever more excited to listen to the end result of this collab. Already is fire.

Mine should be recorded within the next day or two, as I got a 10 day vacation just beginning.

@HKX-- haven't heard from you, u still on with this? I hope so man, your voice would definitely be a real nice addition to the mix.

yea im sure hkx can get it done, i'll most likely be the last one since i already gave u the due date n all that

Alright I got mine recorded now, though I have to admit after I just finished listening to it like 10 times in a row, I noticed a couple little things about it that may cause me re-record or at least touch it up again later a bit. But regardless, shit's moving forward well.

-- Mon Oct 04, 2010 1:14 am --

Well shit, scratch that, I'm thinking I'm gonna totally redo my recording. My breath control is all off, and my delivery just ain't right. I just noticed this after walking away and coming back to it many hours later.
I swear though after flowing so often in this city I live in that's at about 7500 feet elevation, my breath capacity is gonna become real expansive when I flow down at sea level again.

kooooooooool lets get it