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as a vocalist youre obviously chokin-bitch//
you fail to hold-a-script, and cant seem to compose-a-diss//
ill split yer lip as i throw-a-fist//
and you suck more ass then subsist the poser-kissed//

the way you ignore the beat on tracks i guess your flow is bliss,
never seen a coke o' brick sounding so old quick sniffing no doz hits,
then tryna wreck a set looking goofy as a 3 breasted chest,
step correct, instead of all them uneven lines of text ya stretch,
that got you looking like michael j fox drawing on a etch a sketch

haha ive noticed the fading vital-signs//
the way youre ass recycle-lines//
talkin uneven and you wrote 2 and half-bars//
you half tard, i pullin your last-card//

(etch a sketch is recycled, dissin me, early in this cypher)

don't confuse my raps energy with that wack tendency to repeat past lessons see,
if i recycle my schemes stencil its cause i'm a pothead with bad memory,
i'd surrender quick but its obvious you love my lyrics i ain't even remember it,
so congrats, i guess its time to renew your drunken jesus fan club membership,
and saying that was 2 and a half bars? it was 5 in reality only textcees forget that shit

LMAO, YOU cant count audio bars, at least thats what-i-noticed//
cause it depends on rap style for bars on somethin-wrote-bitch//
a bar is 4 tempo-beats so if yer smart youd let-it-be//
are you that bored? you spit and count the shit you write to get-at-me//

Precise....Shut Up i'll Rip Ya Adam's Apple Out And "Chew-it-Thorough" ..//
Then "Screw-ur-Mother" Using a "Baloon-For-Rubber" ..//
And Randomly Skip Around ur Garden Throwing "Dasies-at-People" ..//
Hi i Have "Rabies-i'm-Evil" But i "Behave-Like-an-Eagle" ..//
So Yeah i'll "Swoop-Down-On-ur-Kids"..And "Shoot-POW-On-ur-Lip" ..//
Yeah Yeah Yeah.......Yeaaaahhhhh

wow, no wonder this kids-a-novice//
ill play some bagpipes an write my diss-in-scottish//
listen you odd bitch, your too easy to take-apart//
squeezin life outa you, till yer face blue like braveheart//

zip my zipper and u can suck me on ur knees
cuz u´re atracted to guys like mice to cheese

u an ass kising fag and we dun wanna have-that
you so gay my whole shoe fits in your ass-crack

ur spits sound like caveman rapping in tiger suits
ur so long at basics your feet start growing roots

just some simple lines and simple rhymes not even well conected
but they are still good enough to murk and you not to come back-at



am new here...this my first spit on this site...jus some simple lines...one

^welcome, stay active.

ima double 'dutch' this kid, quick run over and jump this bitch,
you a 'small-fry' ima 'dunk' and shit, quick eat ya for lunch-ya-prick..
you a punk & a dick...i will 'divorce' you from the rap game & of course your a 'whore that brings',
'no talent', be it rap or sing, somebody tell 'K.Fed' his mom shoulda got an abortion not a ring!....

talkin about k-fed, his skills are the size of my lil finger
together ya'll do great reppin worst mc-family on jerry springer
u lunch that prick, I've no doubts about that
but u also lunch that dick, wit ya mouth open like the deep throat cat

I Don't Have 2 Prove U Trash, This Here Is A Waste Of Clout,
But Itz Fine Cuz I'll Just Do My Daily Chore, And Take U Out//
Just Face This Route, U Goin Down And U Ain't Reachin The Top Again,
Ya Flows Choppy, So Here's Sum Advice: Blendin In Is Not A Trend//
No 1 Knows Who U R, I'll Just Ring The Bell - And Alarm This Dispersal,
Sad Cuz I'd Only Recognize Bear Mostly On Charmin Commercials//

yo myzzy (mizzy), let me leave u with an answer sissy
diss me and i'll spin u around like a frisbee
i'll chop ya balls of and use em to play basketball
now u're a mizzy mizzunderstood waitin for her casket call

yo b bear, be awared of the hollow tips that will get u tared,i see it in ur rhymes that ur always scared,u hesitatin to diss back cuz u just wont dare,u walk in ur house and notice that ur wife aint there,mean while im tapin it grabin on her hair, while u in a corner cryin talkn bout life aint fair,guess what i dont care.

A-Yo Was Thata Flow , or HipHop Sentence, Shyt Should be Demineshed. you Be Holdin Down the Streets like Evicted Tendants . not to mention how you Vision yourSelf as an Emcee, Somewun Strap a sign to this Bum that reads ' Help The Lyrically Needy ' ....

im about to verbally drop this bitch//
ill kill you inevitably, like bein HIV positive//
gotta script ill jot it quick, grab a blade and scrape flesh off his ribs//
you can swing but the shot'll miss, so youre best bet is ta call it quits//