Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 12:45 pm
personals/nameplay - definitly Jay
punchlines Just about Jay
flow/swag Sequence
metas/sims Jay
wordplay Jzy
multis Sequence
Vote - Jay Gunna
this was a wack battle in my opinion. First off sequence your verse was too generic and nothin really stuck for me. I aint even gonna bother breakin your verse coz nothin hit as u expected. Then Jay u said this verse was a 5 minute keystyle well it definitly looked like it
Aint No Way That You Makin A Stop Bra..Because Your Fake…An Imposter!!/
You'll Be Quick To Catch Shells For Ya Cheese Like I Was Making Some Pasta!!!//lmao
^^^^
played out as shit ma man. the whole pasta shells shit died with the dinosaurs
Jay you had the occasional dope punch such as the crop circle one.
Jay Punches Known To Make It Hard For Him To Spit Like Constipated Saliva!!!//
Get Clapped With The Nine First…Ima Straight Savage With Lines Jerk/
Also Quick To Break Sequen (Sequin) In Pieces Like Irate Fashion Designers!!!//
i dunno if its my accent but saliva dont rhyme with anything in your verse. and sometimes you over complicate your punchlines to the point where they dont hit hard at all.
but anyway Jay got this by a bit. poor battle i expected a lot more from both of u especially Jay since he been puttin down some dope verses since he joined the site. Sequence i knowu can do bettwer than this too.
punchlines Just about Jay
flow/swag Sequence
metas/sims Jay
wordplay Jzy
multis Sequence
Vote - Jay Gunna
this was a wack battle in my opinion. First off sequence your verse was too generic and nothin really stuck for me. I aint even gonna bother breakin your verse coz nothin hit as u expected. Then Jay u said this verse was a 5 minute keystyle well it definitly looked like it
Aint No Way That You Makin A Stop Bra..Because Your Fake…An Imposter!!/
You'll Be Quick To Catch Shells For Ya Cheese Like I Was Making Some Pasta!!!//lmao
^^^^
played out as shit ma man. the whole pasta shells shit died with the dinosaurs
Jay you had the occasional dope punch such as the crop circle one.
Jay Punches Known To Make It Hard For Him To Spit Like Constipated Saliva!!!//
Get Clapped With The Nine First…Ima Straight Savage With Lines Jerk/
Also Quick To Break Sequen (Sequin) In Pieces Like Irate Fashion Designers!!!//
i dunno if its my accent but saliva dont rhyme with anything in your verse. and sometimes you over complicate your punchlines to the point where they dont hit hard at all.
but anyway Jay got this by a bit. poor battle i expected a lot more from both of u especially Jay since he been puttin down some dope verses since he joined the site. Sequence i knowu can do bettwer than this too.