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great feed back

we still want more for this. so uppin

i agree with plex..come on now skates and a mini skirt?
lame..hun
both of u need multie work, i would recommend learning from ekoms but apparently hes retired from teaching
bill definitely has the stronger verse, u guys should keep collabing together it helps u learn better esp becus even if ur not battling each other u still always wanna have the better verse


wild bill's best:
And your heartll bleed crimson of red, and when you see me comin to you gon be wishin ya dead
An you keep droppin fishin for cred, ya daddy didnt just beat ya he forced it and was kissin ya head

Arv's pretty okay line:
Representin while i spray-illest, you whine for some time cuz i'm takin all the play-minutes
This gay's finished, ask around 4 screen names-in-pretend so he can talk AIM-wit-some-men

This gay's finished, ask around 4 screen names-in-pretend so he can talk AIM-wit-some-men
Emotional, sacrifice lookin stupid 4 attention, makin-threads cuz homework aint-makin-sense,
No respect, like the ho's-expect, phantom's like a ken doll while my flow erects, Dont suspect
You would even see the joke-connect, U slow cuz witta flow so low-in-dept there's no correct.

this was the best shit from you, nice shit


Callin me a redneck? You're gon hafta see, that Im better than you and ya couldnt be a halfa me
If you begged on your hands and knees, writin slit wrist poems waitin for a cryin heart to feed
And your heartll bleed crimson of red, and when you see me comin to you gon be wishin ya dead
An you keep droppin fishin for cred, ya daddy didnt just beat ya he forced it and was kissin ya head

opener was nice man ups

Thanks for all the feed. Much appreciated.