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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 3:13 pm
by Lawgix
for real... jimmy gum-wrapperz haha i ain't takin that shit off its funny
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 5:59 pm
by complexity
I'll just give you one recommendation this time.
Stop saying corny shit, e.g, spelling out your phone number, mothers day, or talking about water guns.
Don't you realize you're attempting to come off as a gangstar, but completely contradict yourself because
you sound pathetic.
"You gonna take me to court, you gotta no my name, my goverments Kris// ahhh"
Do you realize how awkward this sounds?
"Why would you copyright your shit, if you only got not even 100 friends?//"
Do you realize this isn't an insult. He could have just opened his myspace account or not spent all day adding friends to his account. Yes?
Overall the writing is getting better, but not by much.
I don't even know where your head is at. You haven't displayed very strong mental capabilities in the past, I would try your best to take ANY constructive criticism and use it to your benefit.
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 6:18 pm
by T-Stylez
At least u Finallllyyyy using multies like i said u and teached u how to u use em lol. Only thing u needa work on is syllables... make sure the syllables are alright... i'll explain it futher on msn
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 11:42 pm
by BigP
complexity wrote:I'll just give you one recommendation this time.
Stop saying corny shit, e.g, spelling out your phone number, mothers day, or talking about water guns.
Don't you realize you're attempting to come off as a gangstar, but completely contradict yourself because
you sound pathetic.
"You gonna take me to court, you gotta no my name, my goverments Kris// ahhh"
Do you realize how awkward this sounds?
"Why would you copyright your shit, if you only got not even 100 friends?//"
Do you realize this isn't an insult. He could have just opened his myspace account or not spent all day adding friends to his account. Yes?
Overall the writing is getting better, but not by much.
I don't even know where your head is at. You haven't displayed very strong mental capabilities in the past, I would try your best to take ANY constructive criticism and use it to your benefit.
He has been a memeber on myspace since "Member Since 2/25/2006"
And Thanks For The Feedback!
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 2:23 am
by Ambiguous Realm
everything... ur flow.. ur punchlines mostly.. like ur basic as basic gets...try to set up a punchline .. jokes work good as punchlines.. if u can't make n e thing up then try to improve urself with that ... i think ur biggest problem is the lack of intelligence.. the more u know the more things u can say and compare with..knowledge is power and right now ur weaker an infant near death by starvation( although that's CLEARLY not the case lol)
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 2:58 am
by BigP
EkomS wrote:everything... ur flow.. ur punchlines mostly.. like ur basic as basic gets...try to set up a punchline .. jokes work good as punchlines.. if u can't make n e thing up then try to improve urself with that ... i think ur biggest problem is the lack of intelligence.. the more u know the more things u can say and compare with..knowledge is power and right now ur weaker an infant near death by starvation( although that's CLEARLY not the case lol)
wow, can you help me, and no that really wasent funny.
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 9:04 am
by BigP
[quote="Gutta"]y u gotta diss young wes? i checked out his shit and hes not half bad[/quote]
Because I Don't Like Him...
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 9:22 am
by RH1NO
this shit is gay
n this double digit multiple page
reply shit is gettin real fuckin old
especially when youre obviously
not using any of the criticism ta
better yourself n youre fuckin pissin me off!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 9:57 am
by BigP
why is who ever [lawgix in mind] gotta be fucking wit my shit?
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 10:37 am
by Lawgix
man wtf u always think its me fuckin with ur shit? i don't give a fuck about ur shit... if i wanted to even remotely fuck with ur account on here i would have said somethin about it... so stfu and keep my name out of ur head/mouth my God its all Lawgix's fault... moron
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 10:38 am
by BigP
than correct all this shit that got fucked up.
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 10:41 am
by Lawgix
omg.... ITS NOT MINE TO CORRECT U IDIOT!
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 10:42 am
by BigP
YEAH BUT IT'S FUCKED UP. SO SINCE YOUR A FUCKING ADMIN IM ASKING IF YOU WOULD BE ABLE TO CORRECT FOR ME, SINCE IM NOT ADMIN...
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 10:46 am
by BigP
YOU GOTTA BE FUCKIN DOING IT, YOU DUMB BITCH!
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 11:20 am
by mc..horatio..poppins
i am liking to battle you round one
