Hip Hop Forum

-=TraMaTiK=- wrote:bigp..lol on ur address bar ok..it shows the name of the website right?uh huh...u highlight alllllll of that ONLY on a thread u left comments on IN scriptures..once thats highlighted u copy and paste it..go 2 edit copy then put it above or underneath ur post IN scriptures and hit paste obviously..or u can do it simply like most ppl do with the right clickin shit...anyways i tried 2 explain 2 u how 2 put the links..anyway u only have 2 show somebody elses work so more pieces get commented on which leads 2 advice and etc...any-fuckin-way...this was 2 simple as dj stated above..the hook...ehh..it was OK somethin 50cent cud pull off..ur verse was the 2nd u said it & again it was simple..and NO were not tryna tell u suck 2 put u down..were tellin u,u suck bcuz in reality ur not even average yet and we want u 2 understand ur faults & flaws so u can correct them....if we didnt do this u'd end up like barney or somethin...feel me? ur ass better understand or im'a net kill u LOL..anyways im outtie...later...pEaCe

-Tramatik

RH1NO wrote:jesus!!!!!! go to the scriptures n leave feedback on someone elses shit

you want feed you gotta give feed

copy the link to where you left feedback

paste it in as part of your verse

ThaOneYouHate wrote:lol you dont always get feed when you give feed thas why i stopped givin feed... but this was awright it's better then your past shit... written anywayz.. who knowz if ya put it onna track kinda hard ta understand ya most tha time but there is improvement just follow tha advice and dont be thick headed when people give it to ya and you'll elevate in no time..

RH1NO wrote:HOOK .5/10

1ST VERSE 2/10

2ND VERSE 4/10

OVERALL 3/10

flow wasnt ther vocab was elementary hook sucked 2nd verse was better than the first by a little bit