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Post by Street Pharmacist »

i like this peice very creative,the end was tight too

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Days fly so stay n lay by the fire,they say ima liar, it comes straight thru the wire n im tired, fuck the talk i walk a straight line to the lake cuz this fates mine, so i take it down like a shot of everclear, u ever hear the sound of demons speaking in ur ear? i lost fear of death so i smear the meth till i got enough to pierce my chest
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i think this is the most feed ive ever gotten ona written...lol...i appreciate the feed guys....im sure ill b dropping more writtens soon enough....ill do my best to get around to everyones writtens n drop feed on those...
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100 views....and 17 replies?....thats decent!...lol...could use a couple more tho!!...wooord!
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